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A Girl Named Pity

Pity is the girl who makes me weep
By screaming "Fuck Me" in the back seat
She looks for beauty, but only skin deep
In the sportscar
Of the guy she just happened to meet

Jolly is the heavy petting
that gently grazes her thighs
Sparkling are the dead end sweet nothings
That lighten up her eyes
Dazzling are the casual lines
That coherce her knees to the sky

the Sickening mechanics in their lust
Behind Every strategic moan,
Every automated thrust...

Pity is the girl whom makes me weep
As she adjusts her blouse and gets to her feet
How she fixes her hair and heads for the street...

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On Wednesday January 16th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:

gorgeous.

On Thursday January 10th, 2008, Pseudonynill (170) writes:

Do not pity somene who doesn't deserve it. They are given everything because they open their legs. SMILEY :)

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (445) writes:

yeh this was truly great.

On Monday October 30th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (107) writes:

i know that girl................not personally, but it breaks my heart to see her......... she's looking for something.........i'm sure...........LOVE IT

On Friday July 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (19) writes:

the meaning behind this one was totally different then what i thought it would be...nice technique and very insightful words...

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, blue (1757) writes:

very easy to 'see' this one, i like the ending too.

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:

the rhyme of this piece is so rad, just like its contents. thumbs up! -MeL-

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, sixsixnine (456) writes:

This is some awesome awesome work / love the flow but most of all the lesson behind it* such talent * thanxs 4 sharing *669*

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Twilight (2103) writes:

holy shit. this one hit me hard. like one of those you dreams you wake up from that had such an impact on you you cant stop thinking about how it made you feel.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

i feel like i've once known this girl. i hate her. your rhyme scheme, i like! a dark fun read--

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

nice personification. andria

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

the ending is clever, a good twist to the inital images I had in my mind. FF

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, capt_funguy (1000) writes:

brash and blunt ... incisive and repulsed -- kiss kiss / kill kill funguy

On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

Intense. Wonderful.

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