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armour & avondale

the tear he cried fell into a puddle
      as he saw his face reflected
the sun & atmosphere
      sucked up that tear
      & formed a cloud
and that cloud carried the tear 15 miles
      to also cry
      & to drop that tear
on the head of the girl it was meant for

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On Sunday November 26th, 2006, Zen (602) writes:

holy shit, just the idea of that. is so...so... i dont know the word for it, but it's beauttiful.

On Sunday October 22nd, 2006, Brimstone (13) writes:

In all the desperation of superstition this is a skeptical, plausible twist - well thought and composed.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Thorn (432) writes:

Oh, wow. This is beautiful...

On Thursday October 14th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

*warm* This philosophy is lovely, just what I want to read. It's been a while since I came back to your works.. It continues to amaze me. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Saturday October 9th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

great idea and superbly written

On Saturday October 9th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

sad and sweet, sweet and sad nice write

On Friday October 8th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

very nice...painful. short and unstoppable. like most of your stuff. incredible.

On Friday October 8th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

thats sweet!

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