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you kept our love in a jar

(& forgot to poke holes for it to breathe)

visions of your charcoal eyes
& ember lips
is what provides warmth
on cold nights
& a light to write by

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On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, veingo (590) writes:

Oh how many times I've scrawled poetry to that same light. This is a bit of perfection. ^V^

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, shortandpretentious (9) writes:

i really like this one, brett. succinct but simultaneously abstract. i also like your dictum.

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, batman nipples (2243) writes:

This is not any way minimized by its size...simply perfect.

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

another (mini)masterpiece,i really like this one,one to read over and over

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