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stargazer (or an idle dreamer)

if i stopped my heart from beating
if i stopped my lungs from breathing
if i masked my scent
& didn’t blink
would you know i was there
if we were in a dark room together
could you sense my love for you?

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On Friday July 9th, 2004, Mistress Shadow (381) writes:

excellent, although I'm not sure what exactly stirs me about it, but something does. ~T~

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, batman nipples (2243) writes:

I've often wondered this...in simpler words...exquisitely written.

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

brilliant work,the title is brilliant for this,im not sure what else to say,its apparent how good this is

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