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Gazing into your crimson eyes
I swim upon the ocean that was your soul
Two separate universes entwined together
Here the warmth chases away the cold
The silken caress of your fingers across my skin
the way you've touched me with your voice
Spans the barrier I have placed
And allows me to realize i have a choice
You stand behind me, your fallen angel
You hide me from the enemy which lies within
You lift me up on your alter,
Cleanse me of my sin
You hold me softly in your arms
while whispering words of pain
how I wish I could help you
But everything I do is in vain



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On Sunday February 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:
really really really touching. is this message good or bad? was his touch a good or bad thing? i would like to know. but yah i think u r also one of the best writers here-now i have 3 favorites. but i can really relate to what your saying so good job


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:
this one has almost a hypnotic effect...some great imagery. FF


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (24) writes:
i like the ending..."You hold me softly in your arms while whispering words of pain how I wish I could help you But everything I do is in vain" good job! keep it up kid!


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Beautiful imagery, a lovely write I love it. ~L


On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:
this was so sad... it sucks to want to help someone and not be able to... awesome poem...


On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
_awesome!this was very comforting to me.the flow was very strong.wonderful imagery,too.so much great imagery.well done!-tim



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