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Your Hate

As I look into your azure eyes
I float upon the ocean of your soul
As your lips caress my skin
I sit and wonder if you can dispel the darkness within
You light a fire that dwells inside me
And sheds a little light allowing me to see
But a burst of pain, puts out the flame
My heart starts to turn cold
And regret causes my mind to fold
So many burnt bridges left behind
Yet somehow I feel that I was blind
Blind to the love given so free
Never realizing that it was meant for me
Probing and searching for some type of hate
Telling myself I didn't deserve it
That it was my fate
But yet here I am asking you to stay
Just hold me close keep the pain at bay

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On Sunday June 25th, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:

i like your style of writing. im looking forward to reading more of your posts

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

Very vivid....enjoyed the your use of words to desribe all of the associated emotions

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

U agree..the last two lines were my favorite..good work..

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

err I agree *smacks typo demons*

On Friday March 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:

good write. i really liked the ending, the last 2 lines.

On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

great imagery on this. very well written. I especially liked "But a burst of pain, puts out the flame"

On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

this is...beautiful i know that is a typical statement but i have no other words for it. awesome write here...

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

nice, vary nice.~~~Grave

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

I like the change that seems to occur in our poem. It's quite an inner struggle. I wish you the best!

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:

i love this poem alot....i like the middle rhyming it flows really nicely.

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Drea (929) writes:

i think so many ppl can relate to this. i know i can. you worded this so beautifully. ~Drea~

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

the solace of love...found in anothers arms...ahhh I rememebr the days...*hugs you tightly*..

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

*hugz* it's ok..yeah I think we all feel that way at times. this is a nice one

On Monday February 23rd, 2004, evolve (2246) writes:

Beautifully written...I could really identify.

On Monday February 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

i agree w/ nell and suicideseason..i can really relate. beautifully written. =)~lys

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, nell (328) writes:

i see this in myself alot of the time, although i think you have said it perfectly. You do deserve it! don't ever think otherwise

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_wow...the self hatred in this is incredible...this is how i feel more often than not...i ask myself way too many times "do i really deserve happiness?"another nice one.-tim

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