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Rage

Chop,chop, there goes his cock
Then I rip out his eyes
Blood flows from his body
Soiling the ground
I laugh at him as he lies there
Screaming for his death
I'll continue to torture him
He'll regret killing her soul
He'll regret...
Regret it all
Chain him down
Hack off his arms with a dull blade
Dismantle him piece by piece
And laugh as he cries
Laugh as he dies
And laugh at the pile of body parts on the ground
~*~*~*~~*~*~

ok, i have no idea how to classify this, so its under other. i was just a little on the ticked off side when i wrote it

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On Tuesday April 4th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:

Wow you've blown me away.*Grinz* I'd hate to be male and piss you off girlie

On Monday April 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

well i dont think i'm ever going to try and make u mad. even though i dont have a cock, im sure u could find something else importent of mine to chop off

On Friday March 4th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:

....oh my

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, braindead_poet (581) writes:

.....if you and I ever cross paths, and something is said that you don't readily agree with.... I'm hoping maybe we could sit down over a cup of tea or something, and uhhh..... talk it out.. ;)

On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:

That was hardcore horror show stuff. I like it. ~b

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, island warrior (303) writes:

This is full on.

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

This work is beautiful if you know how to see into it.You are an amazing writer I've read most of your work, you are truely gifted with words, I beliave we could all learn something from your work. Don't cut us off now, keep the genuis coming!-Deathwriter

On Friday October 8th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Rage is good. This poem reminds me of my own DP screen name. Thanx. ~Shane~

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (75) writes:

Awesome expression of your anger!!! Gotta love it!!! Rock on...

On Friday October 1st, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

LMAO.~ss

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

lol, if i was a dude this would scare me too. written well! ~sex~

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Seraphic (290) writes:

Chop chop there goes his cock..oh wow, that line was priceless. Vengence has it's place in art, and it life. One of the 25 satanic statements expressed it very well. nice one *~seraph~*

On Friday July 30th, 2004, serpentine_fire (208) writes:

ooh violence. I like this one, makes me feel like I should be taking revenge on certain people. good write ~serpentine~

On Thursday July 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Instills fear-love it.*DDP

On Sunday February 1st, 2004, Evil (542) writes:

this made me cringe. nice work._-=Evil=--

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:

...and you said some of my methods would suck...this is pure pain at its worst from the start...btw, put your older works up, or ask Matt if he still has them... -Darun

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