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Eyeliner Stains

Eyeliner stains...
shields a naked soul
hides the brutal murder inside
brightens the ebony
conceals hidden scars
blurs visions of insight
that may have led to an actual emotion
somewhere in the vastness.

Eyeliner...
lets you cry unnoticed
brings beauty to innate revultion
hacking away at an already dead being.
provides an entrance
to the extacence needed to distract
from a crumbling dystopia
of internal mutilation.

Eyeliner...
coated thicker each time
masquerades even deeper
that which is already hidden.
enhances the vortex of malice,
self inflicted.
it stains openly
when a state of lifelessness
is empowered to dwell

Eyeliner...
an undamaging addiction?
...unless it stains
no removal for the black lines
distorting spirits of devotion
unleashed inside.
taking part in a massacre
by unknowing intentions

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On Monday August 16th, 2004, Brenya Rose (187) writes:

I can only sit in awe with agreement

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

wow, the wonders from my favorite must-have make-up, the eye liner... amazing & very creative, well-done. -MeL-

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

Loved, you're so beautiful and cute and the best! The way you created this gem out of something so ordinary like eyeliner... Wow, talent! ~Wish Upon A Star

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

This is a clever piece...layered meanings expressed very well. I very much enjoyed this! FF

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

funny how so much can come of something so little, hehe. nice use of symbolism in this write.

On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

the more I read the more you impress me+Fallen One+

On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:

_wow...*was blown away*

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

"from a crumbling dystopia of internal mutilation...*stands and applaudes*...absolutely great word usage...thank you so much for this...**jwd**

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

fabulous job on this one. i just loved reading it. u definitely have a vast amount of talent within you. =)

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

its so interesting how this is expressed how focusing on your beauty is numbing yourself instead of trying to fix the problem which will make you worse very cool piece

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

awesome job of taking something really simple like eyeliner and making it like, serve to elucidate so much. Eh... i don't know if that statement made sense. I'm over tired :) but i dig it.

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

Wonderful. Awesome. And other positive adjectives.

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

amazing very awesome very heartfelt

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

gee.... you know what? you're good. you write here with depth, provoking thoughts of something simple. i really appreciate your delicate, deliberate use of words here. nice one.

On Friday February 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

hey- i really like your poetry as well. you have a lot of talent too <3

On Friday February 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

when alice cooper's eyeliner runs, its the coolest.

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Very deep and I like it alot

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