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Unknown Lust

(im not sure about this one, i was high on my thoughts)

Tainted Scars
Explosion
because thats what love does
Eyes talk with a silent lust
waiting for more

Bleed black
Desire
so you can be mine
Their hands hover over us
a dark shadow

Bloodshot skies
Slits
your imaginary touch is electric
The clouds pull me in
eating me away

Scarlet hearts
Chained
addicting tradgedies that begin to kill
A special knowing enlightens all
Bound by reality

Red tears
Murder
because thats what life does
Your eyes let me down
needing you now

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On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

beautiful & talented write from beginning to end... wow. -MeL-

On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

i dont know i really took a lot of time reading this and a lot of your poems it wasnt so easy to figure out your poems have a lot of depth very rewarding

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

i could be way off but im guessing this poem is surreal indeed but maybe a person that once loved you regardless of how much they hurt you you still want them badly again i might be way off but great poem

On Saturday February 14th, 2004, LovedByAMiracle (54) writes:

*is freaked out* you're right on. how could you know something like that?

On Monday January 26th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

interesting.. this could use a little more spice.. but it was a good meal. :o)

On Monday January 26th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

i love this one too "bloodshot skies slits..." love this stanza...your poems convey a maturity well beyond your years

On Monday January 26th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

sorry i dont know your age...i got youu confsed with another poet who said on their page they were 17....sorry again....how old are you

On Monday January 26th, 2004, LovedByAMiracle (54) writes:

im only 14, yes much younger than 17.

On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

I know what you mean about getting high off your own thoughts.. Very much like the poem, especially the way each stanza begins. ~Wish Upon A Star

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