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chasing behind, she begged him to stop
for what was her way without his will?
she'd bent and twisted her path to his
her thoughts thought first what he would think
she tried to view the world through his eyes
and thus, became what she thought he'd prize
but, alas! he loathed disguise
and away he went to live his life
and she no longer knew her size



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On Wednesday September 12th, 2007, waterchica999 (38) writes:
this one i liked a lot it moving damn guys...


On Wednesday September 12th, 2007, lajeeves (62) writes:
That was the shizznit!! How do you do it?


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, Nalle (81) writes:
Especially the last sentence is really beautiful in expressing the feeling after having lost somebody. Hope she found it again.


On Wednesday February 15th, 2006, MindRape (895) writes:
i always hated this feeling....i finally figured out how to avoid it :) i hope you have by now too


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, suicidalsecrecy (19) writes:
capture my heart why don't you! gosh! my favorite line, "she'd bent and twisted her path to his" i've done that to apease (sp?) my lover (ex-lover now). very well written. i love your work. ~s.s.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
Ahh I like this work ... "If you wish to be loved, love" ~ Seneca .... Seneca was a moron, most of his life with moments of genius. The line above came I believe from where he stood most often. As clueless. This poem prove that point I think. Tiger



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