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enter the forest

a maze of mists darkened


wizened oak and aspen gnarled and thick sway without a breeze and some unseen river's muffled roar permeates the brisk fog filled air around you


a moss dirt dance floor crowded by the gods and goddesses of old in a timeless dance to the sounds of gagged silence



my home is here
a demi god among giants


a tender of leaves, each one a life where each pain is an illusion
laid gently to rest by the whispering wind


an ender of words


for the timeless; such trivialities are lost degredations and meaningless interruptions to action




i am tested with maintaining the silence


balanced upon the last dying note of lifes embracing song faced with my undoing time to pull the bullet while all who watch probly knew it all my pain is an illusion


burnt by a breeze disease control eminating fuck it

breathe




in silence all is as it should be




in all it's chaotic tranquility



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On Friday May 4th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
the way you set out the choreography of words in the opening section is mind-ripping salivatingly nuts...the words here breathe to life with a distinct personification and instant gratification......your poems are outbursts mixed with intelligent montage


On Friday May 4th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
and grooves and sinuous detail; detached and then re-attached with some aplomb, darning needle hot.....excellent rollercoaster without the theme park or breaks feel....e-yepp!!


On Friday May 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:
i was hooked from the first two lines XD


On Monday August 28th, 2006, An Expired Member (31) writes:
"In silence all is as it should be...in all its chaotic tranquility" - powerful line out of a very powerful and well written poem.


On Monday August 28th, 2006, An Expired Member (31) writes:
Beautifully decorated with images of the interior - dark - enchanted forest of ur soul - bringing us thirsty into your realm. well done *alone*


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, torn_beauty (104) writes:
you have said alot with a few selected words, you have such talent! you are a beautiful writer.


On Monday August 14th, 2006, An Expired Member (5) writes:
very good i like this very much


On Monday August 14th, 2006, An Expired Member (45) writes:
This is a beautiful poem. And it has beautiful rhyming. This is also very well written.



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