DarkPoetry -|- whisperer -|- reality take me

reality take me

welcome world of all to the stage set ablaze with rows and rows of nobody know where's the road you chose

it just goes and goes reach for the stars while the current of sky slowy flows by and beyond the response to "i wonder why" and "let me die" oblivion ours to walk and fly

run by the bullet squeeze desperation think back cock it and pull it too the bullets fill me

fill it kill it squeeze it till it's empty don't tempt me test me let me break it down and rebuild it gently such is the mind

hung over

rotting and weary

no more dreams

reality take me

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On Friday July 28th, 2006, SamoneDrone (408) writes:

this has a very live hard, live now philosophy to it and is written perfectly to accent that. nice. ....-samone

On Tuesday June 27th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Parts of this remind me of that Fall Out Boy tune. Awesome take on something so fragile yet unbreakable, our dreams. Julia~

On Monday June 26th, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:

god you leave me struggling for air. " fill it kill it squeeze it till it's empty" i could almost hear you screaming this.

On Sunday June 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

you know, i really like this. i don't comment much on you, not as much as i should, mostly because i can't describe how i feel after i read your words. it's like..empty almost, yet full. your mind just seems..electically charged from what i read.

On Sunday June 25th, 2006, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

"Oblivion ours to walk and fly" Great write. Your prose really does have a sweet flow, like june said. I enjoyed.

On Saturday June 24th, 2006, evolve (2229) writes:

Exceptional flow, as always. I think, sometimes, I would like to hop inside your brain to see if your thoughts flow so freely as your pen seems to.. the "current of sky" stanza held me, especially captivated.

On Saturday June 24th, 2006, evolve (2229) writes:

You are something to behold.. and I said it before.. to watch evolve..writes like this..they make me sad for you..but determined, all the same..because..I know sometimes you can't see it, but I can? I dunno. I'm rambling. You're amazing.

On Saturday June 24th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

fantastic poetic form..a good sounding performance piece the tracer effect of trajectory language rollicks and rolls around the minds tongue..wicked as fuck man..ha ha...Col!!

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