DarkPoetry -|- whisperer -|- inside the walls

inside the walls

infection creating the breaking disease
control your electrophile static fuck people impulses

i am not here for you

black scattered ink over hundreds of pages
a word from each of them to revive the body
and write this rework of too many assumptions
towering control board fuck lit backwash of a mind
two souls and a harvester

turn one blind eye to the world and the other looks inside the holes riddling this bone white nightmare
this goddamned cataclysm of broken thought

it numbs me

sweet anesthesia

necter of the fucked

the quotent is written with bloody tampons
the mark is made in dust
tolmes
too many tolmes

too many hands reaching out to touch the walls around my body
not enough silence to make the world with out me
scratching words across the door with bloody finger
the blood was never mine but we'll let it linger

whisperer

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on inside the walls

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Friday May 4th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

the words are juxtaposed and interspersed with manic mind overloads...a spliced mindset wreaking havoc and joyrider expletives ina staccato outburst...the poem is like closing in walls, intensely claustrophobic and heart pounding....love this style

On Friday May 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:

your work is amazing

On Sunday July 30th, 2006, torn_beauty (103) writes:

you have a very unique style of writing. I really just love it. I am just gonna have to fav you. Hugs and Kisses love, -Torn

On Monday May 1st, 2006, Misanthrope (2) writes:

amazing write, im so glad i came across your work

On Tuesday April 11th, 2006, Rafe (13) writes:

the stanza "turn one blind eye..." wow! those lines alone i could spend days pondering on! -Rafe

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, evolve (2229) writes:

Eloquent and grotesque. ..like binding the two words in synonym by way of a tattooed-ink-plague. Fascinating.

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:

God damn.........I just wow! ^V^

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:

i love you work!!!!

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:

"too many hands reaching out to touch the walls around my body" god this is magnificent...such an oddly familiar feeling. love it

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/4378/76027 on Friday September 05th, 2008 10:43 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)