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delete me from your secret
pause in your scent divine

all you satan addict dark massianic throbbing
post descent decay

i am not this time


i dont remember me
im not the way i used to be
im not your answer
not your cancer
just your prudent thought decline

im a never has been thought i could cross the line
that i am bound in tune to verse
fucked in this universe
prone to fly the curse




i aint what i wanted


i cant remember me





am i the way you dreamnt of me

am i not jesus christ?



...


youre the one who likes me




did i meet your expectations
i know i warrant a replacement
tell me darling

was jesus there

when i let you all down did he predict my error

but then you descend to me
i hate this inside of me


i know you christ but im just not that fair

when my world comes undone
im not the only one

who feels my pain
oh god why are you looking down on me
keep them clear
as for me i want to care



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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, RubyXero (489) writes:
i agree with magic hatman on the ending...but overall very nice piece. i like the dark, word-combining pieces that you bring. 2nd stanza...loved it.


On Monday April 14th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
desolate....on the edge, razor toned...I've read your words a few times now, they have a tongue-twisted element to them, they speak in half-rhymes and mindbender thoughts combined; dark and probing...so I tend to like it - I thought this one petered out a tad towards the end though; woulda liked a touch more chaos but there ya go...can't have it always - sadly, for I'm a selfish bastard. Nice work though...


On Friday April 11th, 2008, Sketso (492) writes:
Rather psalmish, in a sense.


On Friday April 11th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
Nice to see you're alive.


On Friday April 11th, 2008, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:
i like the intensity of this. it seems if u were to speak it would come out raw and powerful. like a song.i like how you use a lot of adjectives, very descriptive. it helps me to see better thru ur eyes. excellent.


On Friday April 11th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
LOL.



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