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stop. rewind.
can't find. denied.
ready to disappear.
open up your eyes.
wake up. it's your last shot.
can't bring me down.
hear what what i'm trying to say?
leave it all behind.
its been far too long.

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On Friday September 9th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (462) writes:

nice pace to it... the voice was almost like one of those boot camp military dudes "ON YOUR FEET SOLDIER IT'S TIME TO KICK SOME ASS!" almost, but not quite :)

On Friday September 9th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (462) writes:

the message to me here is that we all need to get off our butts and achieve a little

On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

i like how this is written...it all just plays itself nicely..~AoD

On Friday January 28th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

superb.i like the style of this,and the meaning of it. nice write...i must read more work of yours

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