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Decisions

Reality hidden
Submerged in paranoia
Flaws emerge

Kills the mind
Cripples the body
Everything stripped away

Shattered and broken I lay
Hope is lost
Failure on the horizon

What's left?
Me. Only me.
Shall I give in?

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On Monday February 11th, 2008, lajeeves (59) writes:

On Saturday March 5th, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

*keep your head above water*do not give in to 'the going under'...i love this.

On Friday January 28th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:

what's left? me-only me. well said, this was short yes.. but with such a deep impact and message. very much enjoyed

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I like short poems, this one was good!

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

Short and to the point...I like...**jwd**

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Alanarchy (1698) writes:

Nicely done. A great write. and welcome.

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Drayvinio (14) writes:

thank you for the feedback and the welcome. I have yet to write a long poem.

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