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Darkness Falls
Tears escape
Life is remembered
Memories are cherished
Regrets are forgotten

Deeds left undone
Words left unsaid
Fears are faced

A dream ends
It matters not
As the last breath is taken
Darkness Falls






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On Friday September 9th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (462) writes:
...if this is about the last moments of someone's life, where's the surge of emotions; the "flashing of an entire life in a split-second"? It's not bad, but I reckon it should've been more intense.


On Monday March 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (13) writes:
That movie was weak but I enjoyed this poem. Your writing structure is quite interesting. The last stanza is intense. " A dream ends it matters not as the last breath is taken darkness falls " WOW congrats


On Monday January 19th, 2004, Alanarchy (1695) writes:
Yeah, and I thought that movie was lame. Still, not bad. disregarding the title this was a well written peice. Good work.


On Monday January 19th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
This was ok.


On Monday January 19th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (371) writes:
This is alright, a lot of people have used Darkness Falls as a title lately....+T.P.U+



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