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Enslaved

Looking at these chains of love
Restraining me to the floor
Once I was your "true soul mate"
But now i'm just your whore

You take me out of my cage once a day
And beat me with your whip
You take pleasure in my pain
While I take it in and bite my lip

I know I cannot stop you
You're more powerful than I
I could tell you that I love you and to let me go
But that would be a lie

You no longer believe me when I say it
So I get punished
You make me bleed
And put me away when you're finished

I'm so sorry I wont cry
I'll play your little game
We'll pretend its fun
While I plead and scream your name

I've come off my shelf once again
To bring your pleasure alive
I must escape your grasp somehow
Thats what it takes to survive

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On Saturday March 10th, 2007, prettydisgrace (142) writes:

this is great, your a truely talented writer,i enjoyed all your work ive read so far :)

On Sunday September 17th, 2006, Bluegirl (248) writes:

ooh! I love it! Excellent work. Left me with a sense of doom.

On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:

I like this... something about it...

On Sunday September 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (28) writes:

So this is what the "other" thinks...

On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:

I like this but it seems a little odd that you would want to continue to play his sick games but hey whatever floats your boat or finds your lost remote

On Tuesday June 21st, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:

me likey a lot

On Sunday June 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

what can i say? i love it..

On Sunday June 5th, 2005, Reverend Machine (91) writes:

You know its odd mid way through i believe that you dont want to leave, even though it hurts you still love...though the end i was brought to a universal truth behind your poem...Very good write...-Dark

On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, little butterfly (43) writes:

this is great self expression i like it a lot

On Thursday May 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:

i don't really look like a leper ... i have pics on my yahoo account .. william_wraithe ... let's hope this poem isn't about your life ... the muse of suffering is tragedy in the making ..

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Oh god...I love that poem you are an awesome writer.

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Labitina (45) writes:

I really like this, it's a great write

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, suicideseason (2144) writes:

I never know how to comment on your writing...but like the others,I was left wanting more.

On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:

Very well done - you capture the emotion with your words very well! Keep up the great writing! ~Syn.Dark/L.

On Saturday April 30th, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

talk about chain to a relationship well put

On Saturday April 16th, 2005, Angst Queen (471) writes:

Leaves us thirsting for more. I rather enjoy this work

On Thursday April 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

left me wanting more....keep writing...ill keep reading. - heather lynn

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

I just read all of your works and I liked this one the best so far. The flow needs a little fixing up ,but heck, its really hard to completely smooth out a poem. There are always a couple bumps. Perfectly flawd I'd like to think. :::OLd

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

I like...and if the monkey leaves you comments and wants to read yor works..well yor in girlfriend...lol

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

defanetly a dark poem in stile.. would like to read more of yours to see if you hold other kinds of poetry inside.. welcome to dp .. Monkey (knows you been ere for 9 or 10 days)

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