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"A forest in slumber" by flying_fox

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The crimson sun
lowers its tired body
behind the protective shields
of mountains blue

nestling itself in the
comfort of mother nature's breast,
warm and safe
such familiar security

The trees close their eyes
whispering soft lullabies
as their limbs sway gently
to the rhythm of lost languages

The silent flight
of the forest's nightwatchman
barely breaks the stillness
of the silken air

Deep breathing lichen,
like a steady heartbeat
nurtures and soothes
the tensions of the day away

As a pale lunar glow
calms the young ferns
the night is at peace
and the forest begins to dream



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On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
this is gorgeous..so calm and peaceful..perfectly wonderful to read before i go to bed :). lovely write.


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, urbanhumility (1345) writes:
truly.......you are in touch.......truly you see........and truly you have spoken................ bless these words.......well done.........urban


On Saturday April 8th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
ahhh this is so tranquil and perfect .. the last stanza is like a lullaby .. immaculate .. beautifully penned =)


On Monday October 11th, 2004, torn_beauty (104) writes:
so pretty and calm. this makes me happy. i like it. ill have to read more of your stuff.


On Friday October 8th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:
this is so beautiful. ~sex~


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
if i could, i would have read this with my eyes shut just enhance the images this created in me. this poem really takes you to a nurturing motherly place. i really love it.


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:
brings me right into the woods! this is so heartbreakingly peaceful i barely wanted to breathe.


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:
This is tearful...I can't help but see modernity on the horizon, my damned cynic breathes out oderiferously pointing to what will come...Tearful...


On Friday June 18th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
such a beautiful picture you paint fox...i have misse dyour work. its good to see you back.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
Very well structured . ..I loved the feeling of peace and release this evokes . .Very well done!


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
'...the stillness of the silken air ' this is a very lovely, gentle piece like nature breathing; well done, foxsis.


On Saturday June 5th, 2004, capt_funguy (1000) writes:
drifting , beautiful lullabye ... shadows dancing wildly and all the forest's happy sounds abound .. raccon eyes lit up ... yeah ... i could sleep soundly there ... too cool fox ... funguy


On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:
awe-inspiring


On Thursday May 27th, 2004, Lynaes (1133) writes:
Such soft, gentle, calming emotions brought the colour brilliant colours of the imagery in this. Gives you a warm glow and makes feel safe after reading it. Gorgeous, beautiful work fox, there's a lot to gained from this. Amazing. -L


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, purr_verse (1438) writes:
serene and beautiful, evocative and softly enveloping... i love the young ferns line; i can see their fronds smiling. :) A gently wonderful write.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Ah such a tranquil site this is. Makes me feel sleepy just reading it. Promising sweet dreams to come and grace my slumber. Wonderful read. -Morb


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Drifter (364) writes:
Like the Mute said this has such a calm and soothing flow that you can really feel the tranquility behind the words


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, anth (1610) writes:
the 3rd stanza totally captured me in its enticing beauty and motion, i so loved this,terrific write


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Recycled (161) writes:
This is the best nature poem I have read in years. Superb job.


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
has such a nice flow to it fox, such an incredibly incredible flow... so calm and inviting... loved it darlin'. Sue


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, birdwell (177) writes:
hey!! something new from my favorite flying quadruped... lol, and what a beautiful poem it is ;) ~db~


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
This is like guided meditation...I feel calm and ready to face the day...what a wonderful piece to read first thing in the morning...glad I did!



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