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Red All Over

Lying in a fragile night
warmed by a fantasy glow
the red beaded candle shade
illuminating such subtle motion

skin so pale, inviting
upon red satin sheets
soft focus vaseline lens
raven hair, dark eyes, red lips

long lithe luscious limbs
red nails tipping graceful fingers
caressing delicate breasts
pink nipples pinched red

plump lips parting to
embrace a red-nailed finger
moistened soft flesh reaching
and stroking below

back arching and sliding
drowning red silken sinking
as the pulsing starts to quicken
staining red the white snow

now the candle burns lower
dancing fire in its shelter
singing red for the last time
a fleeting fancy red real

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On Saturday October 28th, 2006, verablue (159) writes:

this flows beautifly. so many great lines, i'd be hard pressed to pick a favorite part.

On Monday May 10th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

I...uh....bu.... fabulous dahlink, simply mahvelous. I want to ravish someone now... erotically fantabulous, love you foxy-Sue

On Monday May 10th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

Very elegant and professional. Erotic and tasteful. The imagery is vivid and the red hue intensified every word.

On Thursday May 6th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (751) writes:

Very descriptive...I think I need some ice water... : ) Ciao, T/S

On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Guttercat (35) writes:

though I'm a scarlet kitten, I've been struck dumb by the intense eroticism of this piece... but the colour triggers my lust. *snarlz* ;p in jest, for I'm but an emasculated kitten...

On Monday April 26th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

ohhhh wow ~ss

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:

'staining red the white snow' ... wow; evocative/sensual/beautiful... and your rhymeMeter is wonderful...tempting...red...

On Monday April 12th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

oh this is wonderful, most enjoyable excperiance to read.~~~Grave

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Wonderfully sensual yet balanced at the same time... A beautiful expression.

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

oh.. goodness! this piece drew me in eagerly, promising infatuation, but the pervasive abstraction into use of the colour... a tasteful and tantalizing balance struck. delectable and delicious!

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

beautiful imagery.i'm speechless.**** my dear fox.knight

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Oh my ::blushes and hides:: Good poem! -Morb

On Monday March 29th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

The first stanza set the mood perfectly, I love the way you capture the essence of a moment in words.

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

this was beautiful and entracing. yay! im gonna go read it again...and fox. your a fox...um. or a hottie if you didnt get the pun:)

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

I've got a dirty mind. Muahaha. This was great and extremely clever. You took one of the simple pleasures in life and framed it in a very timeless way. Awsome. ~Ryan

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

Classy and blissful .. I felt like red...tasted red and soaked in red by reading this ..absolutely stunning!

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

I want to bathe in red :) what a wonderfully sensual write. :::OLd

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, birdwell (175) writes:

red visions swirl, and illuminate the lines so gracefully... so glamorous ~db~

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Evil (547) writes:

wonderful.

On Monday March 15th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

illuminating such subtle motion .... ends up as quite an understatement - you kept it red ... you kept it vivid .... think the magic word may be ... sensuous ... yeah that works ... funguy

On Monday March 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:

"dancing fire in it's shelter" was such a pleasure to read.

On Monday March 15th, 2004, K_Love (688) writes:

Your indeed talented, I love your work. This is passionate and beauty and spectacular! Kirsten`

On Monday March 15th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

very passionate...i like how the repetition of the color red invites you to read the next stanza...eager to see how it will appear...*afraid*

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Six-Out (1822) writes:

Yummy. This piece made me think of a turtle I used to have...LONG story. But, good nonetheless. Very good Foxy Lady.

On Monday March 15th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:

gorgeous!! i especially love the closing stanza - so evocative and beautiful; and such a lovely sensuality throughout. :)

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Wow, I LOVE the style of description in this. Gorgeous and vivid, strong and you've used the theme of red supremely. Excellent piece I love it. ~L

On Monday March 15th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

Ooh so beautiful, loved the way each verse had an element of the color red... Lovely. ~Wish Upon A Star

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