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For Dan

Such words you bestow
upon me, around me
with lacivity and calm
great with intellect and thought

Letting me envelope you
accepting of my flaws
oh, so many flaws
your gaze is lovely

warm blue and cool red
surrounding me
protection in your voice
desire in your touch

you make me feel special
a designer piece
made just for you
to you, I am a diamond

Such kindness is rare
deep sincerity a treasure
these feelings immeasurable
I give myself

to you

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On Saturday December 25th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

Aww I can agree when people are willing to put up with our bullshit they are keepers. Loved it :p ~Ryan

On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Guttercat (35) writes:

dang... Ima feeling a tad jealous here... ;p *sigh* if only I could find someone who makes me feel that way...

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

a very moving, compelling work. your talent, perspicacity, and beauty scintillate through those diamond facets (and your beautiful from the outside too, if i might humbly add). you make Dan a wealthy fellow with your choice.

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Aw, this was sooooo sweet. =) Morb

On Monday March 29th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

you don't look like you have THAT many flaws :) I sincerely liked this sweet and touching piece...

On Monday March 29th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

flaws aren't always visible...but trust me, I have those too!!! Fox

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

nah...you're too nice ;)

On Thursday March 18th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Aw.. Such a touching, delicate, beautiful way to convey togetherness. Gorgeous, so heart warming! -L

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, capt_funguy (998) writes:

still a diamond i can see from here ,,, very sweet write ,, nice to read hap .. hap.. happy stuff ... funguy

On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

I love the wording of the second to last stanza especially. Very beautiful piece. ~Ship!

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

yeah i agree its lovely! you must have been through every emotion while composing this i like it :) well done --

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

ohh...this is so lovely. And you are a diamond, of course. :) purr

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