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the one thing

there's much sucking and fucking
thrusting screaming demeaning
begging pleading and dreaming
for what I don't know

bound in leather together
dripping wax painted feather
keep this going forever
or I'm gonna explode

get me going speed me up
tie me down tie me up
from my juices you sup
and continue to blow

there's much scratching and lashing
welting melting flesh trashing
all your words are rehashing
don't know why they don't go

let me up as you leave me
do not try to deceive me
for your mind does not seize me
this is one thing I know

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On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, ShardsofSilence (332) writes:

Fucking brilliant :) It naturally flows fast and really holds you in it. And the ending was superb.

On Saturday February 18th, 2006, MindRape (891) writes:

oo..heh i call those "snacks" ;D nice i liked this how unashamed the expression. :)

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:

hm. maybe i just wildly missed the point, because i'm not going to use words like lovely or passionate... but this spoke to me of the loneliness and emptiness of people with whom you're still alone, no matter how fiercely close you press

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Wow, I loved the rhyming in this. -Morb

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, K_Love (693) writes:

o0o0o0.. wow this is passionate and lovely again.. This could be a song with those beautiful words.. ~Kirsten~

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

I agree, I just naturally read this at a fast pace. Refreshing to read poems like this on here, a step away from the usual.

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

ok they first to line got me reading and once i started couldn't stop how bout dropping some wax on me i need to get rid of the hair on my legs lol great write

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

yeah this one was definately dast paced. i was breathing deep as i read this one...had to slow it down half way through. sweet

On Friday February 6th, 2004, Sister_Morphine (20) writes:

I really enjoyed the pace of this piece ... very rhythmic and exhilirating!

On Friday January 30th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

smooth,very smooth.i thought i was reading penthouse letters there for a moment.nicely done,especially the end. *thumbs up*

On Sunday January 25th, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:

that was amazing. i love the words you choose and how they work together so well. i really love your poetry. so thanks for posting it.

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

'bound in leather together dripping wax painted feather' an orgy of words; as your sis says, but i wouldn't know either...stiil, the words play well in this fictionstitched bed together...

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

however in excess they be...'this is one thing I know...'

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

you had me from the opening line...lol...awesome as always.keep 'em coming.:)tim

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, purr_verse (1438) writes:

I don't know where you learnt this sort of thing, young lady. >:) hehheh. purr

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

must run in the family is all I can say! FF xxx

On Friday January 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (1000) writes:

nice "tip - toe" around the subject - enjoy your work very much - funguy

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