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Imprinted

lock the door
and slide the chain
keep me safe
inside insane

from cliched words
and see-through lies
from thrusting hips
and burning thighs

ask me not
to come and play
leave my sanctum
time delay

your lave flows
with blistered gust
eternal flow
and firebrand lust

dark mark you've left
imprinted claim
a savage tag
yours i'll remain

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On Sunday April 17th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:

very awesome

On Thursday May 6th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

I absolutely loved the second stanza, but the whole poem is overall amazing! Such a strong, intense rhythm. Awesome work I love this one. -L

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

WOW!!!that was brilliant.i especially liked the rhythm of this one.**** just as you deserve.knight

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

I loved the last part. Great read, great read indeed. =) Morb

On Saturday March 27th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (698) writes:

Nice rhythm to this piece - I'd like to volunteer to lock you in sometime... : )

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

I enjoyed the entire piece. I can't pick out a favorite part. Nice arrangement of words.

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, ariadne (8) writes:

"inside insane" oooooohh...i always wonder which one is the healthy one insane or in sane...BEWDIFUL

On Friday February 13th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

dammit, i thought i left a comment on this already! (brain falls out) "inside insane" - you know it rules...hehheh...i also love "firebrand lust". :) purr

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

I love the rhythm of this....everything just fell together perfectly.."dark mark you've left imprinted claim a savage tag yours i'll remain"....so good to read great poetry!

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Just… wow! “keep me safe inside insane” just blew me away. Powerfully written, with a savage and sensual edge. Very well done!

On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

'inside insane' splendid.perfect. This composedpoem breathes w/ the ethereal 'eternal flow' of spirited rhythm...well done.

On Friday January 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (998) writes:

last stanza is what it's all about - rules to live by - uh... uh ... if you're into that sort of thing i mean - funguy

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