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Disenchanted

I kill you
I relish your pain
I hear your screams
bliss
Your blood escapes you
yet my hands are not stained
I taste it
listen...
I cannot bury you
I'd rather see you rot
stench
The same as when you were here
your earthy maggot words
addicting me, infecting me
silence
I'm clean now
my brainwashed sight demystified
free
Free.

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On Saturday October 21st, 2006, urbanhumility (1366) writes:

a mantra of inner strenth......well done......urban

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

I have no words that could ever justify this poem. I am left speechless... -Morb

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

damn it never free always a little piece that lingers as here but that doesn't matter when you're a piece of shit like

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

this fellow must be you deserve to let others know just how bad he was and how much it hurt

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

"I cannot bury you I'd rather see you rot" some strong hate there. im loving the malicious feel of this one. its always fun to write something like this.

On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

...the opening line got my attention right away....again alot of power displayed."your earthy maggot words addicting me, infecting me "...is brilliant.i felt each word reading this piece.-tim

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1105) writes:

'your earthy maggot words addicting me, infecting me silence I'm clean now' the blood escapes me, but i taste it, almost as pain, aslmost less; but i taste it, the sting of Tennyson... a Rocky Horror bite; a little black, little white/this poetic s

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1105) writes:

...this poetic scream is bliss. bakkstreet boy! (ouch!); 'my brainwashed sight demystified.' free-zing... backup downed. lovely little write...

On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

LOL - you know I'm kidding re the Bakkstreet Boy! (Though I'm sure yu're a wonderful chorus-line dancer...)

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:

Mmm...I sense anger...angry at the addiction to the beautiful and innocuous words of a liar/cheater. Maybe I'm completely off...

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

You are, of course, spot on. Liar, cheater and odious little tick in general. :) FF

On Monday January 19th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

if that's "disenchanted " , i'm afraid to read - " really pissed off " - more - more - more ... funguy

On Sunday January 18th, 2004, Alanarchy (1678) writes:

"free Free." Very cool. Powerful to the max. Great write.

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