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smoky supple sunstroke

locking horns with wings
battling choices
between good and bad
immorally slung
words overlap innocent emotions
on the sidelines
of this twotoned forcefield
of high energy

where barren soil and fertile skies
osculate in the middle
outlined with a waterflame rut
filled with spilled smiles

as breaths ostracize sorrows screams
disfiguring consecrated
perceptions of a volatile vley
overflowing

in this season of madness
betraying insanity
with a doubledged blade

christened
by the whispered wisdominating
incinerating windsicles
impaling hearts and melting maturity
into excursive thoughts

aggregating
reality with dreams
affable in inkmisted shapely
descriptions of slushy smatter

dividing omnipotence
into peccable portions

handed out at funerals
with dirt

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On Saturday February 5th, 2005, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:

This sounds like something I would have written. I commend your word choices in your odd phrasings, but there is something about this for me that is still lacking; and it seems to be that it doesn't seem to culminate properly.

On Friday February 4th, 2005, island warrior (302) writes:

This blew my mind.Extremely well written

On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

damn you and you unfathomable talent....my envy is endless

On Saturday January 29th, 2005, purr_verse (1435) writes:

you really can weave some captivating imagery, sir knight! :) compelling and as ever, full of excellent phrasings; i especially liked "into excursive thoughts" and that opening line. fine stuff indeed.

On Friday January 28th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

so i got a chance for the first time to read some of your work (the poem you did with emptyness) and once again it is fucking A Awesome ~~g.a.p.~~

On Friday January 28th, 2005, AniDayz (1268) writes:

absolutely amazing...this is excellent beyond words.

On Friday January 28th, 2005, elisa (2021) writes:

like a comet dive deep into the earth swallowing mouthfuls of soil while swimming to reach the core.....quite an image you present here:) stunningly beautiful my love~elisa

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