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drawing intricate plans
as i have now seen an aerial view
to this labyrinth i stroll
incoherently losing myself deeper
within these walled veins
of intelligence shocking me from
pores vortexes locating
pieces of myself withering in
timeless moments like an
old cardboard puzzle
thought withering
in teardrop
skies

erupting gangre gashes
slicing open smiling clouds taunting
this terrain
self seen
twisting truths in lies

working to see myself in ashes
dancing in angels breath just haunting
a newborn dream
against the grain
becoming the hope that supplies

safety of survival

coloring blueprints to
liven up the paths behind doors
i'm about to unlock with
my bladed words turning hedges once thought
to be decorations actually
proving to be welded strips of sin
creating a steel wall of doubt
i destroyed with heldback whispers squeezed
between lightning lips lacerating
lurking leeches fiending
to watch me fall upon
arrowhead snares
the further in
i travel

working to see myself in ashes
dancing in angels breath just haunting
a newborn dream
against the grain
becoming the hope that supplies

erupting gangre gashes
slicing open smiling clouds taunting
this terrain
self seen
twisting truths in lies

revealing retribution

nudging numb numbered noises
screaming from deathboats
sinking in pools of ill
mannered growths that
burst and spew upon
faithstarshores
gleaming with
gnashing
light
bright
smashing
begining myth
glasscarspores
dead and almost gone
of life under a slat
of souls buried on a hill
in limbo trying to escape moats
defended by half full angelic voices

still managing to uphold
rusted and tainted
passion from
never doing
more than
sipping

wisdom
from a cobwebbed cradle

where i remembered my first
memory
of

being whisped away on dreams of
destiny dancing to music
from Heavens mobile




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On Friday February 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (446) writes:
wow, you use poetry techniques like they were made for you.... the alliteration, metaphors, personification just stunned me.... this is powerful imagery, beautiful work....


On Friday February 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (446) writes:
and the structure is so innovative, yet concise and well written to emphasise your meaning. Thank you.


On Friday February 4th, 2005, suicideseason (2102) writes:
The structure of this is entrancing.The inward eye is so harsh.It's what keeps us from drowning when we come upon rough waters.Well done,sir.Very well put together.


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
'pieces of myself withering in timeless moments like an old cardboard puzzle' brilliant! Superb formatting: reflects visual emotion (& some great aliteration). Convincingly and convexly evocative; graphically complex. There is strength in the texture


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
...to this vivid prose, w/ cobwebs of delicious teeth. A palpable sense of the melancholic & enigmatic beauty that is the bones & blood of filmic poetry. Bravo!


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Future of Despond (92) writes:
Ah, a fairly powerful work. Well done.


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Gideon Lost (187) writes:
Wow! This kinda throbs and undulates if you read it fast enough. I like your style. Imagery and metaphors are great here.


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Zhee (638) writes:
this is definitely one of the best i have read from you.... held me captive from the very first line... created the most entrancing mirage in my mind! brilliant!


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, indefined (679) writes:
holy crap, what a trip. masterfully constucted in a great rambling cadence. most awesome work.


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Anth (1571) writes:
10 outta 10 for this, i knew itd be something special from that first verse, enjoyed this a lot


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Solace (1400) writes:
I have now seen an aerial view...straight into the loveliness and then bam bam bam in a continuing brilliance that espouses wordwisdoms that all should breathe in to feel the fresh air...truly fantastic piece


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, elisa (1991) writes:
the heavens will always spin above our eyes and below our souls......we are everything in between...every being, every thought and every touch......always make it soft and beautiful~layers of love~elisa


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, blue (1701) writes:
hmm..well, maybe I'm reading too much here but I'd say this was born from the womb of pain....excellent work as usual Chris. ~b


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
Holy shit muffin - where the hell did that come from - this is a bad ass tooth kicking write man "sinking in pools of ill" stanza after stanza of perfectly shaped poetry in the form of play doe. Awesome [D&A]


On Thursday January 27th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:
this was an amazing write more like a master peice hon im adding this to my faves.



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