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"Something About Silence" by knightmirror

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as the Cold Sun sets
shadows merge
across fossilized leaves
limiting space
to conjure up regrets
that constantly surge
through thoughts that bereave
unseen grace

as the dusty smiles fill cracks
stepped on and broken
paralyzing happiness that spent
years to obtain
knives buried in backs
while lungs were chokin'
on words that were freshly bent
evaporating in the rain

as burnt compassion withers
under wounded wings
souls spiral up to the ground
like a dustdevil
lurking in the wind that slithers
down voices that sing
when tears fall but make no sound
once choirs revel

there's just
something about
silence



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On Sunday December 26th, 2004, AniDayz (1284) writes:
damn man...this is great. i absolutely *love* the 2nd stanza


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, braindead_poet (581) writes:
there really is something about silence; more so to some than others, of course. to some, silence is feared because in it is found that mirror that many dread looking into.... this is magnificent chris....


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, braindead_poet (581) writes:
your style has advanced in the last so many months; I'm noticing that now it seems you know what you want to say, and that you're taking your time in getting it out. but then again, it's only my opinion. Love, Ian


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:
wow---this entire poem was beautiful, but the ending just tops it off. this was amazing.


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
wow- this one goes on my fav list... the images solidify in the last three lines... the style here is amazing!


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Full blame (33) writes:
interesting style, the way imagery comes together. your "Cold Sun", amazing.


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, elisa (2036) writes:
Silence aches...........*blows kiss*~elisa



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