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i've finally been graced
with courage
i relentlessly
searched for
immediately
obtaining control

as i gazed into
a regurgitated puddle of lies
reflecting
the suffering
endured by my souls heart
struggling
to produce love
held hostage
under untruthful
fabrications
spit from the mouth
of a deprived
squire
starving to be seen
in the limelight
that has faded
to dishwater blonde
angering the ignorance more

so i hid everything
from all
striving the buried smiles
to slowly shine
so i patiently persisted
pain promising
to prevail the past
to pack up
and leave

i then wiped misery's mist
from every shard of the mirror
anxiously awaiting to see me
for me

i'm now strong enough
to defend my beliefs
with honor
shining
from armor worn
to battle
the pestering past
i let go of

unaware of the grudge
fed with fury
imprisoned
with one desire
taunting and tormenting
sin
incarcerated
in a cell
of...

unbreakable mirrors
replaying the day
i abandoned the crowd of
demons and amputated
my tail
using it
to rip out my hollow horns

then i slammed the door of deception
on the way out
locking it and
destroying
the key

i stand in awe
as i witness the dissipating streaks
clear a fresh view
of myself
staring back at me with the look
whispering

"there you are"



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On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:
resurrection... glad you found yourself knight... 1, Seth


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Sin (1637) writes:
bold and insightful just like the person who wrote it ~kristy


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
I don't know what to say. . . . Very well done. A_C


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
Well, I'll be - this write is very moving and stirs very well with the eye slipidge. I am proud for you - for pressing and breaking through in this relentless persuit of self understanding. Excellent Chop. [D&A]


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
i don't know if i can say anything worthy...but this truly one of the most insightful and honest pieces i have read.. this is definitely my fav!


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Indeed, the ending was particularly stunning and glorious.. wonderful work, chris. "there you are" was perfect.. actually gave me goosebumps. Nice work.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
This had its moments, to say the least. I found myself caught up in it every once in awhile, only to be let down. It could do with some revising, but thats not to say it isn't good.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
Astounding. Th ending was staggering . . simply stunning. ~ Rose.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
Through these self-defining pieces, we not only become to better know the soul of the poet, but to see through their eyes, in a completely different view. I look at you in a different light now with a newer, ever richer respect. Captivating.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
godamn man, you're on a roll alright, this is superb, you just get better. cool stuff.


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
Dishwater Blonde...Par excellence...Very personal write, hinging upon honor and virtue and fresh eyes...to see a world as never before...a wonder indeed...


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
just fantastic, sir knight, fantastic. i love the ending... Simply a wonderfully realised piece. Take a bow. :)


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Nightmarist (13) writes:
wow....amazing work


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
Self defining piece...what more can i say?I don't have to tell you how hard it is to write something of this nature.It's like extracting internal organs via osmosis.


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
I can hardly find the words to even echo. This was fantastic. So revealing and hopeful. VERY nice piece. The truth was piercing. -Glass


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
Dude...you've rendered the king of babble into speechlessness...savor the victory.



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