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a dulling sharpness
pertrudes from origins of
times when tyme put
a halt to pain like pulling
on the reigns of a
loyal steed
sipping greed
from a tropical trough

wielding swords
built by a blacksmith
wise in the words
chosen to become blades
for the right man
deserving such a powerful
weapon

i can remember being denied
a blade
like a young squire i yearned
to grow
so i could wear my suit of armor
covering
emotions i wear on my shoulder
daily
constantly being crushed by weight
hailed
through my halo from the heavens
by the
Gods trying to teach me a valuable
lesson
as they bury my destined weapon a
little
more deeper into this petrified
heart of
mine still beating and bludgeoning
me with
pebblesseducingracefulteriorganized
motives

as i sink further
into this quarrel of quicksand
it occurs to me i
will soon be nothing more than
the.....

SPECK

i once was



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On Saturday October 30th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
great piece! compelling pacing that builds and builds throughout; and a nice 'ashes to ashes' style conclusion, if that makes sense... (Hmm.) Anyway, regardless of my sense or lack thereof, this is a highly impressive write. :)


On Friday October 29th, 2004, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
hmmmm, mr. mirror castle. This is by far the most impressive write I've seen yet to spill from your poetry pump. Here, have this trophy .. Le - Carp of excellence. [D&A]


On Thursday October 28th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
Oh wow. the "I can remember being..." stanza had a flow that just wouldnt stop. And the abrupt ending was perfect. Like barrelling downward into a brick wall... or losing the last grain of sand from that hourglass. Amazing. -Glass


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, DarkDruidess (195) writes:
I loved the structure of this...and your words hit hard.


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was utterly captivating.. the imagery, the structure, the depth of expression and choice of words were brilliant...


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, NikesRain (1420) writes:
everything in this is outstanding Chris, the wording, images, emotions and the way it reads. You could never be a speck, you shine too brightly for that. Well done, as always.


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, elisa (1987) writes:
if you are a speck...than truly the whole universe could fit into a grain of sand:*) this is filled with amazing insight and depth:) B E A U T I F U L:) elisa


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
awesomely done. i like your style man, brilliant imagery, powerful wording.



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