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sprinkling icicles plummett
through my skin revealing my veins
as if i fell upwards into a
stalagtite of melting wisdom still
freezing my courage and faith
behind fissures and pictures of burning thoughts

scorching...
charring..
de.l..iv.er..in..g

packages of exploding pain
like a suicide bomber

twinkling stars streaking
the atmosphere crashing into my mind
disintegrating my skull
frazzled and fractured from fantasies
dancing on dreams that
use nightmares as its ballroom dancefloor

twisting...
spinning.
sh.i..ve.rr..i.ng

/i/n/
deserts of chalky sand
s..e.e..p/ing
/i/n/
heated sights of afternoon
sle/e..p.i.n..g

curled up
left for dead
on pillows of dunes

doomed

sleep tight
for me

i'm
g.\on/.e



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On Monday October 11th, 2004, snowdrop (2257) writes:
This gave me very lovely visions in my head...absolutely stirring...a real smash! Nice one.


On Monday October 11th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
"dancing on dreams that use nightmares as its ballroom dancefloor" between this and the last two lines... I am literally awestruck. I'm so caught up. I have to read this again. It felt so desperate but so glorious in its pain. Loved it. -Glass


On Monday October 11th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
Goodness. I love this. Its so honest and painful. Wow. I've missed reading your stuff, babe. Love it. Love it love it. -Glass


On Monday October 11th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
well written discourse on pain and hopelessness - unusual style that works really well here.


On Monday October 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
_jesus...you're depressing...lol...seriously though,great stuff.it oozes total emptiness.excellent all around.


On Monday October 11th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
nice write, knight. A_C


On Monday October 11th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
wow man, not sure what to say on this one, other than its damned decent work. I especially liked the opening stanza.


On Monday October 11th, 2004, elisa (1991) writes:
i feel like i've been living in my own shadow lately......my soul feels liquid thin...this hits very close to home for me.....amazing insight, simply brilliant Chris~ elisa



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