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*note to the readers*
"thank you...i love you...all of you...enjoy"

a tremendous weight has been
removed
from...

my heart
(breathing love)
my shoulders
(stretching wings)
my mind
(collecting thoughts)
my soul
(soaring skies)

hate is dangerous
it feels like concrete shoes
laced tight around broken ankles
being submerged in cess pools of
colorless sin

i was surrounded by shadows
until the bag of burdens
left my hands

immediately...

laws of gravity no longer applied
to me and my side splitting
sprouting wings

i have found myself caught in this
spotlight of joys beams reflected
off crystal coated tiel feathers
on wings of a convoy of angels
surrounding me

so this is what clear sight looks like

i still hear the flapping
harmonious clapping
playing throughtout me like
entertaining
elevator
music

i know now,i know how
i know why

this is my...

how could i have been so blind?

...destiny

visions of a new path are recorded
like a treasure map
where everyone is
an "X" that
marks the
spot

in my photographic memory
needing no blackroom
to develop wisdom
being revealed
in...

my heart
(aching to show you)
my mind
(showing me how to show you)
my soul
(watching reactions to me showing you)

my world\/our world
(what you have shown me)

i'm wholeheartedly dedicated
as i listen
with open

ears and eyes
heart and soul

know that you can count on me
now,always,forever
and eternally

to recycle this
epiphany



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On Thursday December 29th, 2005, dismal silence (20) writes:
this is a beautiful write, thank you for sharing it


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
very well stated


On Friday October 8th, 2004, elisa (1987) writes:
I get such an intense feeling of peace reading this poem... written with true angelic grace like being lifted out of the doldrums and carried on the wings of salvation...I love this poem and the caring writer for sharing it...just amazing Chris:) elisa


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Sin (1622) writes:
i couldnt help but smile for your newfound joy, this entire piece lifted me up, another beautiful write ~kristy


On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, NikesRain (1420) writes:
this reads and flows so nicely with an air of release and exhuberance. Lovely and uplifting piece this, and I'm glad to see that you've found something to lift you up ;)


On Monday October 4th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
beautiful! "my shoulders (stretching wings)" is gorgeous; wonderful tone throughout this, and lovely sentiment within. wonderful write. :)


On Monday October 4th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:
'in my photographic memory...' awesome verse... this is remarkable man. The visualizations... the brilliant imagery... just well done.. :::OLd


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:
excellent


On Monday October 4th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:
being submerged in cess pools of colorless sin ..seems very happy, like you've found something beautiful and you really want to share it, and with your words you have, great write... very beautiful :*


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
beautiful knight and so uplifting, it tends to make one think


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
awesome! this was so beautifully done.~in my photographic memory needing no blackroom to develop wisdom~.. excellent work!



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