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Heavens Graveyard (an ode to Talking in Gusts)

stillframe photo'synthetic
texturevaporates tastes of dreamlike
stages having no sound or
peace of mindless treasurestolen as
timerasespaceverywhere
reuniting us once again with our creator
in a crater of filth and sin
drenching us with lies and decietwined
inside sight of open eyes
burning each of us intourselveshivering
from cold wind from wings
talking in gusts of cyclones unconcious
decisions carrying answers
to untravelledillemaswingingreed
in one hand,reaching for
ours with the other one that's free
taking a risk as safety
disintegrates like sand between
barefeet on shorelinestreams
vanishing with rippleswimming in
transparent beams of light
while magnificent moons merge on
maroon tears of angels
flapping broken wings,wearing cracked halo's

leaking love

upon all our graves

shallow as the opinions we spit

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On Tuesday October 4th, 2005, Esau (282) writes:

.....i, uh..i, um,uh, yeah...damn.

On Monday February 14th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

um damn damn damn i had to read this one like three times your words seemed woven together ~~GOTHIC~~

On Friday December 31st, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

this was a wonderful write, very thought provoking and it kept me on the edge of my seat as each line passed acrossed my eager eyes great job ~Emptyness~

On Sunday July 25th, 2004, Lynaes (1133) writes:

You wonderful person you... happy beyond belief that you're back, like a beautiful tornado. I never forgot your knack of sweeping one away, stealing breath. this is incredible. Missed you so much hon. *hugs tight*

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, evolve (2221) writes:

This was surreal to me...I was tripping as I read...fixated over the material and the impact of its meaning...nicely done, Knight. You've still got it.

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, anth (1610) writes:

your back!! my friend, weve missed you man,seriously,and ive missed reading your works,the style of which is in display again here triumphantly,a marvel to behold the fusion and deeper meanings, so very cool.

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

_talking in gusts of cyclones unconcious...shit...this is truly in the spirit of the poem that inspired it...we really cornered the market on the macabre/depressing together.

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

...we walked a dark avenue of hopelessness and regret.fueled by an undying intense hatred...down...out...not giving a fuck...

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, Choronzon (236) writes:

This is pretty cool. Creative and quite vivid with the imagery. Good stuff, man.

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, NikesRain (1503) writes:

..I really liked the way you had the words flow together. Very unique. The imagery is great and adds to the even curreht of this. Nicely done.

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, Rain In The Willows (859) writes:

holy crap this was freakin great...awesome everything kya

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:

Whoa. I had to read this twice. It messed with my eyes. Beauitful piece though. I like the concept behind it... and the ending. Good piece. -Glass

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