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In Silence and Faltered Faith.

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The sun implodes
in silence and faltered faith,
as the final golden sunrise,
transfigures to hazed grey skies.

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Ensuing firestorm erupts,
in breach of the horizon.
Unveiling, at long last,
the portrait of god,
tranquility, ruin.

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All that remains,
Vacuum,
constricting breath,
From seized lungs.

Man and god live here, no more.

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On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, Esau (284) writes:

damn good piece. damn good.

On Wednesday July 27th, 2005, blue (1701) writes:

Dude! Stop it! I don't want to think.. lol. You rock fucking hardcore! ~b

On Sunday April 24th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

Amazing write... what is also amazing is that you never lose my attention when i read your writes. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Anth (1571) writes:

its not the way it happens in my vision, this work though, is breathtaking, your skill shines throughout as i expect from you.the portrait of god, tranquility ,ruin , one of your classic moments

On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Anth (1571) writes:

. the whole vision is just so finely crafted,as it will be, your voice pervades

On Monday April 18th, 2005, suicideseason (2102) writes:

Sol is right the objectivity of the narrative is to die for.A dark reality that few have the balls to think about...but you were never a sheep.I love the second verse.The climax instantly the anti-climax.Awesome.

On Monday April 18th, 2005, suicideseason (2102) writes:

...Like the hero of a film walking through the door for his first scene...some one guns him down before he utters a word...Salvation:Denied.

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Astra Dei (632) writes:

yeah... what sio said

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Solace (1400) writes:

A quiet apocalypse (revealing of the hidden) Even the words designating impact come out calm...It feels like inevitability, like resignation... "Tranquility, ruin." Completely mind blowing, reverence...

On Monday April 18th, 2005, sIo (845) writes:

lovely imagery and description. each break between stanzas makes for a perfect brief moment to invision and gather all that was said before. if this were to really happen...i think it would happen just like this.

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Astra Dei (632) writes:

wow... wow...

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