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(Read each line then read it together with the next line,
1 and 2, then 2 and 3, then 3 and 4, etc. You should get used to it.)

+--+

Cross eyed,
I cannot see the world
From your point of view
There is no strive to achieve
What you stand for
cannot.

+--+

Will fades silently
Onto the horizon
Where I sent my hope
There is no destination
When and where we meet again
We have been deceived.

+--+

And what we see
Is not what we believe
An end to the dream
Would be all too sweet.

+--+



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On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, veingo (589) writes:
Oh yeah. I like this one. I wish I'd thought of this kind of structure. You put it together perfectly. ^V^


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, Mab (1021) writes:
such clever structure! "Where I sent my hope/There is no destination" ...I love it.


On Monday July 9th, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:
Word. This is why you are a king


On Thursday March 24th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (331) writes:
fucking awesome...very clever dude


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:
woah...love this...pure poetry...should be seeing as how this is a poetry WEBSITE....but some are from the heart and others aren't....strange relations in this piece...keep it up ~ME-UC~


On Monday May 31st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
this is supreme art at its most creative but from you i come to expect it,


On Monday May 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (37) writes:
creativity! that took a great mind and u did an awesome job at it!


On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, lollipoplips (110) writes:
this is awesome.clear eyes for red eyes, dute!


On Friday March 12th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
This is sick, I love it!! Brilliant thinking! =) Morb


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
wow ... you built this one ... very impressive ,,, funguy


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
For the effort, the intelligence, the creativity placed into this... I have to add it to my favs to chew on for awhile. What else can I say? :::OLd


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
I love what you've done here, excellent work. ~L


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Drea (934) writes:
clever indeed. i have never read anything like it on dp. Again I am with Alan. This kicks so much ass. Hence the *favs*. ~D~


On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, PointlessX (47) writes:
"..An end to the dream Would be all too sweet."--seriously kick ass. Taking poetry to a whole new level--PointlessX


On Monday March 1st, 2004, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
This kicks so much ass. Dude, this is a fav for sure.


On Monday March 1st, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
This is extremely clever. A double meaning/reference for each line: quite a challenge to have pulled off successfully, all while keeping flow and sense... very well done. purr


On Monday March 1st, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
Gorgeously written.



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