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Stars and Mist.

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Reigning the skies in pallid grey splendor,
clenched in the grasp of a relentless winter.
The earth grew mute, wrapped in slumber,
as life became vague and hindered.

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Snow settles over forests ancient,
as elder stars glow incandescent,
radiant with reborn hope and patience,
as war and plague settle across all nations.

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On Sunday November 4th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

the tempting world around and mixture of spiritual elements make this simply delicious.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

I am speechless at the sight of these stunning words. Immaculate piece, my friend.

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Sin (1636) writes:

wow, what can i say to do this justice, your words painted a picture in my mind and left me breathless ~kristy

On Thursday July 1st, 2004, Cwn Annwn (107) writes:

I love the lines "The earth grew mute, wrapped in slumber" nicely written and a wonderful piece~GoNe~

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

i have to admit that this was beautiful...absolutely hypnotic and compelling like june said this is worth throwing at strangers on the street

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

You work amazes me...=) Morb

On Monday March 1st, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:

Strangely compelling.

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

This strikes me as very sad actually. I get a combination message of unworthy and unecessary regeneration. Maybe I'm off. Either way it seems more a serene message than a desperate one and I enjoyed it. ~Ship!

On Monday March 1st, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

"elder stars glow incandescent" is beautiful... nice kick with the last line... damn humanity. purr

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Beautifully written I love it. ~L

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

"Reigning the skies in pallid grey splendor" ..Each line was just breath taking. Perfect writing. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Evil (542) writes:

Very compelling. This is why you're in my favorites' =) *dances*

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Alanarchy (1599) writes:

This was very deep, and metaphoric. Most compelling. Very well done, bro.

On Friday April 30th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

this is just awesome, the feeling as if the calm after a storm, such beautiful reflection

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