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"When Time Wears Thin." by TheProphetUntold

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Inhale the still september air and
draw the static from between our lips.
Stoke the embers with the harvest
of frail blown kisses, gone amiss.

(For fuck sake.)

Blot the stars in sapphire and ash,
they have never held a candle
to the gleam of flame on blue eyes
through fogged glass, glossed with tears and wax.

(It never came.)

She licked the decay from my teeth
and smothered the fire in my loin.
Side by side, glistening in spent lust
triumphant and beat all the same.

(Let it go.)

Beyond the guiling spell of autumn
chanting pine cracks and maple smoke.
Even the proud fool grows weary
of November frosts' crystal cloak.

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When time wears thin.

Throw my bones to the hounds of hell
and bleach my dim memory
in the brine of the sea of time.

Please bid me no farewell.
and for you , I swear.

I'll do the same.

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On Thursday November 6th, 2008, Evil (491) writes:
perfection.


On Thursday October 23rd, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
love the ending... the imagery seasoned just so... with the intertextual dialogue speaking thoughts, desolate and impending... then the end with stoic tone, welcomes finality with honor and pride... very nice.


On Thursday October 9th, 2008, batman nipples (2243) writes:
"She licked the decay from my teeth and smothered the fire in my loin." The word choice throughout the entirety of this piece is immaculate. I'm damn envious of your captivating way with words, but not so much when I listen deeply to the resonating echo of emptiness in this. It's so disheartening, like an unsent letter that will never be read by whom it was intended to reach. This touched me, deeply. I thank you for sharing yourself like this.


On Thursday October 9th, 2008, Alanarchy (1698) writes:
These would make great, versatile lyrics, good for just about any accmpanyment. I would really like to hear it with some dark folky acoustic, and some trippy synth. Something like iron and wine, just a little more spookey.


On Thursday October 9th, 2008, Alanarchy (1698) writes:
"She licked the decay from my teeth and smothered the fire in my loin. Side by side, glistening in spent lust triumphant and beat all the same." Fucking beautiful lines. The moods change, like keys change in a song. Write on.



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