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"Alas." by TheProphetUntold

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Nightfall.

Upon these hours, we tread
in alien form and mind.
Trespassing in reverie
at the grove's mystic breach.

It's yawning facade exhales
a faint, and fair fragrant mist.
Red, with whispers of dreams
of a ripe raspberry kiss.

Our ears chilled, and cheeks blushed
as through the gate we rushed.

The trees' amber, monarch leaves
fluttered about in the gentlest breeze.
Grazing weathered moss clad stones
fixed timelessly on a glistening creek.

The humming birds flew
in shades of yellow and blue.
Whilst the sun settled unto,
(as always time will prove)
a world too good to be true.

A pity we must adieu.

Alas...

I don't love you.



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On Sunday October 19th, 2008, estherbell (108) writes:
reading this felt like a nice fly,but the end...the fookin' parachute didnt open.quick death.


On Friday September 19th, 2008, Sin (1622) writes:
you paint timeless elegance with your words...as always you left me breathless up till that last line. what a bitter end to something so sweet *tips hat* ~k


On Friday August 29th, 2008, Anna Helianthus (1120) writes:
"Red, with whispers of dreams of a ripe raspberry kiss" very beautiful..and those last stanzas were kinda sad :(


On Thursday August 28th, 2008, Mylissa (1056) writes:
took me to a place of first love, the moment of expected romance only to twist and turn into a demise of reality. The ending was killer...wonderfully done.


On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, elisa (1991) writes:
a gradual build up... sapped at the end. nicely done.


On Sunday August 24th, 2008, Narcissa (726) writes:
A captivating picturesque piece...only to be blown away with the ending.



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