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"System De-fragment : Part One" by TheProphetUntold

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Initializing.

The cold embrace
with granite tile.

An unavailing
three hour stand
that's left you jarred,
clad in the ruin
you call yourself.

And a well worn whore
otherwise known as
the bathroom floor.

Without doubt,
she's had better.

Nevertheless.

Her blackened veins
shimmer and gleam
opalescent
in hues of pulsating neon
and fluorescent lamps.

Their ballasts drone,
resonating
off paper walls
and toilet stalls.

A steady hum.

Rhythm to guide
half steps forward
toward the leagues
lost in reverse.

Mirrors stare,
faucets whisper,
and clock nods.

Your pix elated visage
registering nothing more than
another stain on broken glass.

A phantom,
Trojan virus
depleting the air
of oxygen.


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(...to be continued.)





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On Monday February 11th, 2008, Fantecstasy (86) writes:
And I'm amazed you turned a seemingly dull process into this piece of art. My god... Really enjoyed it. (pix elated also deserves mention, I'd clap if you could here me) *tips hat*


On Monday February 11th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
I have really admired your works I've read so far, you're a real find - your poetry fraught with the symbiosis between language and thought! Heh! But like 'rust' (I think it was) you seem to exert a cold detached metallic feeling, almost like a futuristic narrator's vision, or something from a different place, different time.....excellent poem, excellent voice..


On Monday February 11th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
and it's a shame you lack feedback for your incredible abilities....shows you what a good lack of taste most members do have...shame on them


On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, Mab (1021) writes:
perhaps many of us are too stunned to find the words.


On Monday February 11th, 2008, An Expired Member (43) writes:
very unique piece. This is really nice, I loved the way it flowed. I had to rethink the true meaning of it over and over. Thank you.



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