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Drip. Drip.

Dripping,
Vanity.
 
Steel drain serenade.

Rusted mirror seeps
inching to cracked
rose depression tile.

Reverberating,
mildew starfish
parasites clung to
peeled lime lead
porcelain caskets.
 
Settling.
Slip.

Slipping,
Sanity.

Smith/ Wesson dream manifests,
from glazed slotted spoons,
burnt sugar and crimson plumes.

A euphoric
Vesuvius.

Death spores erupt
in operatic ballet,
a theatrical slaughter
of (s)innocence.
 
She spreads her wings,
a viridian eclipse
of frankincense
stained glass aura.

White linen, outlines,
still infant hands
pruned in pedaled pools,
of stagnant water.

Blood spatter streams
down cedar pews
and gold leave walls,
into worn grout lines.


A slow,
inching
flow.

In reverie she flies
on steeple high as
bells ring the melody
of their nerve gas elegy.

A crowning
percussive note
escapes the..

Pistol.
Grip.

Gripping,
Reality.

Adrenaline surge,
death contraceptive.
Kick starts flooded lungs
exploding to the surface
in a shower of acid rain.

Limp.

Pruned hands claw
for blackened tiles
and sugared pills.

Webbed eyes meet
(t)rusted mirror.
A frame of time
absent of truth.
 
Shattered in the coronation
of his pistol gripped empire.

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On Monday October 29th, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:
tragically inclined. Delicious to my brain.


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, Circe Avalon (184) writes:
really pretty, I liked when you took phrases and made a different meaningful phrase with the last word. It turned the perspective of the common phrase into real use in the poem.Like I said really pretty..


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, verablue (165) writes:
such an interesting use of words. gripping...i didn't want to stop reading.


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, Narcissa (628) writes:
extraordinary use of imagery!


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
Impressive elucidation, the increasing envelopment of the piece is astounding - dripping fire into mouths, spitting fire out of mouths, life and death in the frame - with that pensive absence - and a deep sense of loss...


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2402) writes:
astounding use of language, you really are a DP "unsung type" (if there be such a thing), this is a poem chock full of thought and action; I will find you a poem, possibly a new one too. One word: superb..


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:
Great inanimate character development. I enjoyed the rhythm and the (ab)use of your parenthetical double words. Is there a name for that device or is it of your own invention? I am pleased as a new member to find other works that are actually entertaining


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, What Limes (157) writes:
I like the last lines.



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