DarkPoetry -|- TheProphetUntold -|- Lie Still, Lie Cold.

Lie Still, Lie Cold.

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The stars
never
do shine.

They burn
for life
you breathe.

And watch
it pissed
away.

For not
a word
for naught.

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Time worn
Jotun.

Lie still,
lie cold.

We all
explode.

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On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, sIo (892) writes:

this makes me sad...it seems all sweet at first ...then BOOM. *makes funny unsure face then shuffles off*

On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

i wish i could write with such simplicty and elegance.... you astound...

On Friday July 20th, 2007, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:

god I've missed you.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

you fucker, this was incredible

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:

I like this. I always like short ones more when they say more than the long ones do. This one does. Good write, man.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, saintedmad (1178) writes:

very cursory pen; gripping and grave in its tone. . . nice to see you post again!

On Monday July 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (11) writes:

lie still, lie cold. we all explode. highly infectious, characterized by high fever and aches, Yep, i think this gave me smallpox.

On Monday July 9th, 2007, AHHH (243) writes:

i'll gladly explode. i may change my mind though so don't hold me to that. aka, lovely job.

On Monday July 9th, 2007, Mylissa (1084) writes:

Powerful play of words, like torn death before it passing. Explosions are our cure maybe? Well done.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Mylissa (1084) writes:

What happened to all the other work you have done? This is amazing. I enjoy the intensity.

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