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Under the milk wept blood
this universe a million miles away
in trajectory through Creation
shivers of balance like cracks in ice
impenetrable, preoccupied (as at
first light) near the face, eyeless
towards the doorway opening it’s mouth
weeping, pulsating w/ insects, worms
in segments, bifurcated, the heart’s throat
so old as apples unspoiled in infinity
feeling the hum, thrumming, strumming
lions on the beach as the tongue of night
explodes, machines like elephants
naturally drained, sucked of moon & sun
unfound, convulsed, to understand
the grasp of pebbles, rain and exhausted caves
lessened from the telltale of laying waste
crushed in metal, polished over charcoal skin
reflected in the half-empty umber bottles
where last you found yourself, under torn rooftops
tar and the city, crucial as a moment longer
while waiting for the last haunted crow to come
hunted in agony and the gifts of discretion
in bones & bites & buildings as forgotten
as the unholy bells, suffering in garden wombs
the hourly battle of temptation, this amputation
of the soul we give ourselves unwittingly to,
swallowing the burned shadows w/ dirt and dust

where weeps the angels of the unbreakable incubus
in a fog for the eye and grinning danseuse
you hold your breath and cry.




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On Monday May 21st, 2007, insideout (60) writes:
One of the few poems that kept me eager. You are an incredible writer. Nicely done ;)


On Tuesday May 8th, 2007, Jonas (862) writes:
when i've simply thoroughly enjoyed a poem it's hard for me to leave a comment to say only that and nothing more... however, that's just what i'm going to do.


On Saturday May 5th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
which exists independent of thought.


On Saturday May 5th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
i want to say this sucks -- and in some strange, bifurcated way it does -- but in the realm of actuality it's quite lush with a couple of things I won't name (one of them being cancer, but that's all you're getting out of me!) this is just something whic


On Tuesday May 8th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1112) writes:
I respect ALL forms of thought/opinion (& i hope I'm not reading too much into "cancer", having nothing to do w/ this poem...). Thank you.


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, An Expired Member (43) writes:
My goodness this made me smile. It was incredible. brillant write.


On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, carlosjackal (1619) writes:
This was an absolute surreal image-fest a-go-go, beautifully stitched together like a mad perfect tapestry. Rich language, flow..Dylan Thomas himself would have been proud :) TheJackMan


On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Lynaes (1138) writes:
"in a fog for the eye and grinning danseuse you hold your breath and cry.".. imagery dancing in dirty puddles.. gripping, twisting words.. coiling around the senses..


On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Lynaes (1138) writes:
"this amputation of the soul we give ourselves unwittingly to".. you never know you're losing yourself to something until you've actually given it away.. "machines like elephants". Amazing!


On Monday April 9th, 2007, Mylissa (1122) writes:
This felt to me like an escape. a brilliant twirl of words. you are incredible.


On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1157) writes:
"lions on the beach as the tongue of night explodes"..only you could come up with that..and the title..brilliant. i found this to be rather kerouacesque, at least it sort of came across that way to me, i could be wrong..


On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1157) writes:
it just rather reminded me a bit of him..though that probably wasn't your intention. still, this was quite detailed and fantastic..and i read somewhere below about this being about purr's cat?? my condolences..:(


On Friday April 6th, 2007, swing_the_hammer (76) writes:
my favorite thing about your writing is the way you bypass pronouns... selfless poetry... amazing. L


On Friday April 6th, 2007, purr_verse (1438) writes:
Nobody wordplays like you do. It amazes me how consistently you create new marvels that are so entirely recognisable as YOUR work. You have such an astonishing talent.


On Friday April 6th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1112) writes:
I highly appreciate your words, your comments of kindness - they mean an LOT to me. TA!


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Alanarchy (1638) writes:
Like E.A. Poe shot through time and made to spend a year in the crux of our society, then sent back in time to write. This was a pleasure to read.


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Zhaal Nyet Telka (167) writes:
This was a malitious form of painful words, such beauty hidden behind them. It was heartfelt and made me want to run and stay. "Weeps the angels of the unbreakable incubus" Beautiful.


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1112) writes:
Thank you; it's very hard to see, but I was thinking of my wife's (our) cat MePhisto who just sadly passed on; the feelings our in the poem, like puzzles, amongst other things.


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1168) writes:
this feels like a continuous mescaline rant of epic proportions. almost like free lance thought poured into a microphone to a steady bass line and a glass of jonny walker. you = soul


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2386) writes:
Under Milk Wood; this is like Dylan eaten by Dali; a surreal neo-Romantic maelstrom with language to die for, your imperceptible allusions and rhythmic guile and cryptic construction....just knowing something out of nothing becomes art


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1112) writes:
You're too clever; immediately when I wrote the first line (w/ the intention of using it as a title) I thought of Dylan Thomas, but decided to not change it anyway. Glad I could help u w/ a New Perception, & your constant comments mean a LOT to me. ...


On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2386) writes:
and gives us all....that inspiration to go on and better our lives, that's what your poems have done for me, made me re-evaluate perception of the world and of myself


On Friday April 6th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1168) writes:
not to pull on the hym of hatters dress like a timid child, but i fully agree.



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