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When you burst out in rage
opening and opening

With white laughter from the ear
scarred ever and ever

You shiver with the horror of the moor, motionless
moving away, further away

As dusk in the cardboard creations of stars
mushrooms blister, black spores in the morning

Of mourning and lament, and your animals
weeping and weeping

The innocents of incinerating insects, pulsating
wrinkling weaker, stabbed and stabbing

To fly through the steaming web of cities
mouth down on the wet humus, in echo
and bone-

The storms like honey, drains the soul to fossilize
murder in the accusations of feathers, of fuel
these living dead, vultures
that vomit Iguanas from ashes, etcetera

And etcetera, electric candles for Leonardo
like old post-card roads, whispering and whispering
into the volatile winds
and windows, even though with the mouth smashed
the golem still grows as dusk waits, against gravity
all mountains rise, fall

Lashing photographs to the tides of moons and crows
the bird’s talons like Christ’s pounding heart
in dewdrops on the cross, Eve’s womb
complete inside her, the horrible secrets
tight around her neck

Never and never-the-less,
the head falls apart and the eyes crawl across the floor
opening and opening
like an umbrella or a black dress.





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On Thursday May 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (21) writes:
I`ve never heard anger described like that. An explosion of the senses. Beautiful.


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1120) writes:
fuck, i love the ending. thats such a twisted visual i now have..eyes on my kitchen floor and umbrellas in a funeral. perfect.


On Friday April 27th, 2007, Tonights Decision (162) writes:
a city dirge rising..i read this like "seeing" when its to late.. the dress is already bloody..like the seemingly unstopable erasure of the humane in the city.. and on a final note, you got flow to kill for..


On Friday April 27th, 2007, Tonights Decision (162) writes:
Sometimes your poems.. have a simillar, but very much your own dystopian poetic "feel" like a very good author named China Mieville, maybe you havent read any books of his, but still had to tell you..


On Tuesday May 1st, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
Ahhhh, I know Miéville quite well... I'm sure I've been sub-inspired by his magnificent works (hopefully not so much that I seem too similar; but he, having been inspired by M. John Harrison, often reminds me of that great writer - all writers...


On Tuesday May 1st, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
...are sponges, to a point, I suppose). Many thanks...


On Friday June 8th, 2007, Tonights Decision (162) writes:
ah, well similliar might have been the wrong word i was looking for, well i blame this language of yours, heh. its more of a hinting feeling, so vauge in fact that i might aswell mentioned M.John Harrison or even William Gibson for that matter


On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
fav


On Monday April 2nd, 2007, carlosjackal (1735) writes:
Poe-esque tintinabulation, absorbing rhythms, language and form..this was a beautifully realised piece. Ta very much! - The JackMan


On Saturday March 31st, 2007, slow.burn.star (98) writes:
storms like honey and a bloody black dress... xxx


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
surely you will never loose your touch of devine


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Kalibo (60) writes:
I liked this very much. The title fits perfectly. So vivid and imaginative... wow. ~Amber


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
~the constant rhythm (almost monotony) helped deliver the message along more clearly...with images such as echoes, bones, ashes and fossils it feels that the dramatic situation occurs in a loop sequence...


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
and with regards to the title and feel...blood dress, a bloody dress indeed everyday gruesome happenings that still happen even if we don't like or accept them...


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
If the above comments are WAAAYY OFF THE MARK just disregard :P (i can't tolerate my own idiocy sometimes)...a cool sounding poem, very upbeat and with an angsty (i feel) tone...very cool as always



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