where has this poem disappeared too?

this was fantastic, almost like my pupils turned into projectors and my retnas became screens, and you my friend, are the 8mm film

Holy hell!! I need to go over this a couple more times....but strangely it makes me smile. *bows to bakkhus*

The ending is BRILLIANT. I'm still kinda grinning about it. Are you bathing in LSD while I'm not looking? hehe. Seriously, though, this is fantastic - in both senses of the word.

holy shit man.....some kind of acid test!!! :P....Comte De Lautreamont must be turning in his grave....the humour, baths, the symbolism and the text....this was bizarre and off-Beat generation for the X....to the Y,Z and chromosome sexual surreal progeny.

bathos*

Phew!! Can you advise me on what to have for breakfast please - holy heckers, this was a poem ablaze with elding madness alloyed in my liquid mind.....wickedly wild and lunear to the linear to the max....yep

gah....welding madness* no less

~yeah what he said...psychedelic hallucination trip hahah