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there you are
flitter & flutter
into the ionosphere
all those little spaces
between the raindrops
between the rain, the drops
of our species
you follow, you swallow
the ghostly yellow of taxi cabs
hang outside the rain splashed windows
of fancy cafeteria signs
buzzing around the tables
waiting for the scraps to arrive
your Musca domestica wings twinkling
in the painted blue buzz
of the electric/neon wind
you fly about, fly around
you don't care that no one wants you
no one loves you; in fact, you don't
even know those words;
(from larvae/maggots in stagnant ponds,
to decaying flesh to dung,
to trashcans and lightbulbs...)
you'll be gone in less than
a few days, but to you,
that time is as infinite
as a human's life;
think of the stars
and we see that what we really are
all of us insects
here, there, everywhere
in between supernovas
the parking lots and super markets;
as long as our star will last
and then we too will be squashed
in the end,
gone


















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On Friday February 16th, 2007, Endifference (258) writes:
Ahhh! It's True!! :(


On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1120) writes:
"twinkling in the painted blue buzz of the electric/neon wind" brilliant. i adore insects, and any poem that captures them so perfectly deserves applause. i love the pictures, too! excellent.


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, Tonights Decision (162) writes:
intriguing, to say the least.. something to ponder, and still a disturbing vision, there where a lot of insects on the subway the day after reading this, and i was one of them. Awesome poem..


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1733) writes:
Excellent tight, cocoon-like form and driving rhythm..not a word wasted..as always, another great write to add to your mahoosive collection.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Lynaes (1109) writes:
It's amazing, how each individual person's lives seems like the world to them.. but, like Z said.. we're all just a grain of sand on a beach.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Every single life form, however big or small, can have an amazingly beautiful world around them..


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Lynaes (1109) writes:
makes you feel quite insignificant in a way, that we're all heading to the same "squashed" destiny. Intelligent wrote, as always from you.. I want to wrap this poem up in silk and give it a big hug.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Write* even.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, TaintedButterfly (1021) writes:
I read this in a fast pace, and the rhythm and flow were excellent, spot on. But I felt the message in it was much more important. Well done, as always Jon.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
you're a tick under my skin. i am diseased, and you are lysergic. compell to mortal men fell, such that i might be the archetect of your demise.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, purr_verse (1423) writes:
Fabulously realised allegory; concise, vivid, insightful, powerful. I've found myself in the same situation as Jay - no bookmark room, but DAMMIT I want to. This is outstanding.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
Cicada's syllabic anthem....was it *ionosphere*? Or deliberate? In between supernovas carparks, granite mountain ridges, nooks crannies and cracks of imagination.....love that superbreed feel, let the world unfold, quaint and lush


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
"ionosphere" TA! I was tempted w/ aeonsphere, fusing those two words together; I liked the rhythm a bit more which is why in the end I mispelled ionosphere; thanks for the catch. I will use "aeonsphere" in something else...


On Friday February 9th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
hey I found this quote: "Something in the insect seems to be alien to the habits, morals and psychology of this world, as if it had come from some other planet: more monstrous, more energetic, more insensate, more atrocious, more infernal than our own" -


On Friday February 9th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
- Maurice Maeterlinck (1862 - 1949). I think you made the insect world more human here, not a Kafka nightmare metamorphosis but a tangible element intertwined with of existence :)


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
That "Kafka nightmare metamorphosis" is brilliant, and that Maeterlinck quote is pure genius; thanks for sharing that one...


On Friday February 9th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
our* existence - excuse me...


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, dying angel (1307) writes:
this is something to always come back to. something to read to realize that no matter how high up you are inside your head, you're really just another spec on this earth. and even the smallest of things can


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, dying angel (1307) writes:
create the most beautiful poetry. this was marvelous


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Jay Jii (330) writes:
I adore this piece. Miraculous...


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Jay Jii (330) writes:
Damn! I tried to bookmark this, but I'm full. Not used to the whole postcard thing...


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
you speak with the elegance of frost, with a metropolitan twist of old Tom Waits! your metaphors are untouchable and galactic, like you sit in space with a pen and simply observe the universe. write on brother!


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
aye aye


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, soul dancer (163) writes:
I love that you take time to create an intricate piece about an insect. And we are all insects in comparison to the grandness of the cosmos. Beautiful.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, GreyDividing (193) writes:
Great imagery, man. Do you write for a living, because i've read some of your work and its impressive. Your use of language is so vivid it's almost three dimensional. Powerful.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:
ionsphere....unbelievable. stunning.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
"Ionosphere", actually, but that was my error; accidental misspell 'cause my brain was more in tune to the rhythm. But, manythanks anyway!



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