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Hellisinus. Absinth and amber.
Bitter barrows along ghostly roads.
 Cold diamonds in her bloodbold eyes.
Beneath the crows and sparrows, flowing...
All along those dusty codas.
 Lakeside romances where the cicadas come to make music,
come to lie. Lay and sway and dance and play,
where the next of November is fey.
We drink golden cups to suck the silken stuffs of gods,
the flowers from Hades we taste
to copulate in their gardens;
wicked and damned.
To degredate our names
in sin,
in stone,
in grey gravestones
and eat the earthen worms
& broken words of dead poets...

Defile ouselves on walls
& profanities
& paint our toenails green,
beneath unfinished clouds;
listening to Steve Vai
in a lighter shade,
in gentle ways
whispering
"Frank"
in burning blue essence,
like a Boston Rain Melody
that somehow gets away.

Where will all the little islands go
when the stars collide?
Absinth now and sin within,
this hell in us
all. This fire garden.
Die to live. Live to
be within.

(eNd.)
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

~Inspired by a friend;
you know who you are,
little birdie! Watch out, kittens have claws...
I think I'm a "radio"...heh, heh.
(But not the "Oh, radio").

(And just in case anyone is wondering, "Frank" is a song by the
wizard guitarist Steve Vai [Grammy Award-winning guitarist,
composer and record producer.; a song in honour to the genius
that was Frank Zappa who gave Vai his start...transcribing
some of Zappa's seemingly endless arrays of
experimental symphonic monster rock operas.
Vai is Zappa's "little Italian virtuoso"
&
listed as "stunt guitarist!"
Check out the lyrics, and then the song "Stevie's Spanking". Also,
 "Boston Rain Melody"
is an enchanting Steven Siro Vai
soft/melodic instrumental...
"Die to live" isanotherVaisongtitle.
I was listening, obviously, to Steve Vai
while writing "Helianthus" and his music seemed
the perfect soundtrack to the poem. I've been fortunate
to see Vai a few times in concert, and I saw Zappa once,
shortly before he passed on to
that Eternal Fire Garden,
or the Great Gig in the Sky...
"As Above, So Below").



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On Friday February 2nd, 2007, TheProphetUntold (349) writes:
*blink* Yes, that just happened. The opening fours lines caught me with my mouth wide open and it still hasn't shut. If this were a bottle of wine, I wouldn't be able to afford it with an entire paycheck. Spectacular poetry. +tpu+


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
I agree with Mylissa. Your work is always stunning.


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
brilliant collision of hedonistic assonance and consance rippling in heler skelter peotics; landslide lush, your brain is a bulky labryinth of word collusions and superlative cahoots with imagination; mythical and contemporary wickidness!!!


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
grrr....helter* skelter, and so fourth


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
"superlative cahoots!" Yeaaaa!!! I was wondering about your "heler skelter" and thought perhaps the Mad MagicHatter hat a wee bit too much of the ole drink; but I suppose No, or not. All-n-all, a "landslide lush" always dig your 'peotics' comments. ...


On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
hahaha...nope. I just had problems with fingers vs. keyboard


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
oh, my...this is fabulous. i'm struck speechless at the beauty of this. *hugs* you are amazing, poet!


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
Thus Spoke Helianthus! ...and in the name of poetry, so art thou: heh heh. You are too kind. Thank you for the inspiration, you flower of fire!


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
Stunning.


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
second stanza is so powerfull, and the structure to the piece gave me a drive to keep reading (besides your unflawed vocabulary, analogies, and metaphores). Helianthus should be proud


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:
Impressive. Helianthus will be forever burned into my mind. Such power in your words. Keep that flare alive.


On Monday January 29th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
This flowed like a gorgeous wine, and flew with great wings of imagery, beating a rhythm through my arteries, a rush of blood to the head.."we drink golden cups to suck the silken stuff of gods".."to copulate in their gardens".."Defile ourselves on walls"


On Monday January 29th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
.."in burning blue essence".."this fire garden"..Fan-bloody-tastic!! I think the blood's still rushing to my head you know..or is that just the Absinthe?


On Monday January 29th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:
Wow. I had to read it twice to understand. That last stanza was powerful. This is a strange and powerful piece. -Jes



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