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“Now I've heard there was a secret chord...” ~Leonard Cohen

Then the heart was struck
The rivers dark by way of
Old roads, old crows & old clocks
Down by the railway docks
There was no life left in Babylon
This haunting, this hunting wind (and wild)
Winds through this cut heart
And the drink of my swollen lip
All the best ways were already taken
By night, the owls opened up
(While Frank played on the radio)
As urgent as the death of virgins
Behind the veil of the pistol & gin
What any man would do
When he hears his heart on the end
(As if down on his knees)
Of a tree branch, with the willows
And oaks dying, the forest no longer comforts
And intimate is the expression
Deep in the design of fate
By name it is nature
That the heart is struck, like an old car
On a simple road
And broken down: Jeff Buckley
On the Chevy’s radio, all the memories that bleed
In a moonlight sonata full of blues and holes
B Flat notes and Holy Ghosts
Listening to
“Hallelujah...

“The fourth, the fifth
The minor fall, the major lift.”
The end will always be horror
Will always bring sorrow
The great event always beautiful
And so you are, though you’ll never know

If you ever have doubted this heart.







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On Monday October 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1735) writes:
Nature and the human heart, those songs of nostalgia tick-ticking that special chamber in the brain as the music makes magic in the soul. Brilliant, brilliant portrait in widescreen :) -Carl


On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, glasshouse (771) writes:
"In a moonlight sonata full of blues and holes B Flat notes and Holy Ghosts Listening to “Hallelujah..."This is....transcendant. Beautiful. Final. I expect no less than excellence and you always deliver. Well done. --Jes


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1120) writes:
i love that ending..such a beautiful way you put this..it brought back memories of my own. "By night, the owls opened up (While Frank played on the radio) As urgent as the death of virgins" this left me with a beautiful feeling. thank you.


On Saturday December 30th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
this was like a vintage portrait .. i loved this .. an exquisite piece of work ..


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Lynaes (1109) writes:
"All the best ways were already taken", god I felt that too. There was a sense of feeling lost all throughout this. Okay I really will stop now, haha. Wonderful work.


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Hallelujah is one of most favourite songs in the world, and I am most partial to Jeff Buckley's version.. so I appreciated the quotes, as they fit into this so nicely..


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Lynaes (1109) writes:
"And broken down: Jeff Buckley On the Chevy’s radio, all the memories that bleed In a moonlight sonata full of blues and holes" a lovely captivation of retro nostalgia..


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Lynaes (1109) writes:
"the heart is struck, like an old car On a simple road" ..that struck a minor chord in my heart, I felt like I knew this poem inside out.. I shall stop before I start quoting every line. :P


On Friday December 29th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:
"As urgent as the death of virgins Behind the veil of the pistol & gin" this felt so much like a diary entry. the spilling of thoughts without holding back. the imagery is wild. this was perfectly bitter. and the ending is stunning.


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Mylissa (1056) writes:
you are so beautiful.


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:
this was a quiet piece of perfection, a haunting song and such beautifully fitting imagery to accompany it.



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