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"The Puppet Tragedies" by Bakkhus Unbound

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how the wooden lovers
cut their throats
together-

passionate puppets of love felo-de-se
a stylized fashion like
a
walking masterpiece-

hanging ashen dreams
over cardboard
orchestrations of stained
monotone skin,
wrinkles in sober countries;
crescendos of cicada dawns
through scarlet
streets-

they value each other
as instruments to cause
each other pleasure
in pains
like Baudelaire’s lovers
patior: “I suffer”-

they keep together very real
as significant as flowers-

this canvas of theatre
this temple of the dark stage
this darkness under impassioned
strings, strumming
under
a
dis-

(s/un)oriented moon-

in the end
they inevitably fall;
amputees of tenderness
in charcoal parasols
& bags
of hieratic imagery in anguish,
geisha murderers to themselves-

isolated for
the
subterranean kiss
upon the backstairs
beneath
the paper stars.





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On Sunday December 17th, 2006, purr_verse (1423) writes:
beautiful, poignant melancholia in that conclusion; and this - "in the end they inevitably fall; amputees of tenderness" is just perfect. Multilayered and marvel.lous.


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
my kind of shit....simply put...dance it


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, Jay Jii (330) writes:
"isolated for the subterranean kiss upon the backstairs beneath the paper stars" - Sheer marvelousness. I definitely relate to this piece.


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
Wonderfull write. Loved the flow and wording


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:
this is so fucking beautiful, jon..i'll try to return with a more coherent comment.


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:
i could see this all play out in front of me. the details are so vivid. "this darkness under impassioned strings, strumming under a dis- (s/un)oriented moon-" i dont think there are enough beautiful words to describe your masterpieces.



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