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When he was Insane
Beauty never left his side;
The punk girls all
Cut their flesh for him
In the pool hall bathroom stalls;
And Suicide danced in his honor.
Even the Hard Boys
Smashed windows and burned cars
Shouting his name
In the back streets of South Boston.
He’d laugh
Till his lips turned blue.
When he was Insane, he
Was the King of Punk Suburbia.

then he killed a man, and
became sane; he shed his
black coat of lunacy, and
his moon fell away

He walked awhile with Delirium
He smashed his guitar and went
For a swim; the Muddy River washed
All over him. And he became, instead,
Sorrow. And all tomorrow’s parties
Seemed to make sense. Now Beauty
Disowned him, burned all his records,
From The Clash to The Damned.
All the punk girls spit in his face
And Suicide was sacred no more;
And even the Hard Boys
Scratched down his name
From all the graffiti stained walls;
Pissing on his open wounds
In the dead-end alleys of South Boston.
He’d vomit till
His lips turned green.
When he was Sorrow, he
Was just another punk in suburbia.






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On Friday January 6th, 2006, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
i read this twice and enjoyed it every time...a precipitous irony at its best pragmatic form...knife-like in its moving achievement....mastered truthfully. ~michelle


On Monday January 2nd, 2006, suicideseason (2141) writes:
This what I have come to expect from you...epic imagery that comes through the screen in apocalyptic 3d...every sense felt this piece.Always amazing.


On Monday January 2nd, 2006, purr_verse (1435) writes:
Extremely effective write; sharp and cleverly observant with wonderful descriptives and reflection. Excellently woven piece indeed.


On Monday January 2nd, 2006, saintedmad (1184) writes:
smells of 'a clockwork orange'. . dashing write.. darktruth irony dripping.


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:
this is a classic, perfectly summed up as you are best qualified to do so on such things*if that makes sense* exceptional work


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, AHHH (241) writes:
nice.


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, AHHH (241) writes:
damn.


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, James_the_Saint (132) writes:
Oh so sad, I like this very much. Forgive me, for my comments are useless and unpoetic.


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, Raven (377) writes:
I have no words to even start doing this piece justice. I love the imagery, the subtle tributes and the nearly haunting similarities between king and nameless pauper. Perfectly written in all respects. *tips hat*


On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, blue (1739) writes:
o.O)) well.. what to say? This came across loud and clear.. fantastic write!! ~b



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