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everywhere i have always ventured, softly beyond
yet still experience you, your beauty where lay silence
as you move most frail in velvet such things which warm me,
as wings i cannot breathe for the sun cries too near;

your gentle look easily does unbound me
even where i have closed my eyes as dream,
in you flowers open always silk by silk kissing spring:
( mysteriously, all moons wave in you ) oceans crawl;

oh how your tongue as the taste of wines, and
my life drinks the spirits you pour, beautifully
for as this heart of this poetry imagines sonnets
everywhere as music ascending in summer’s violins;

never would any disbelieved perception of this world equal
the gifts of your fragile soul: such fantasy in soft passions
what drowns me in the colors splashed of your layered flesh,
pausing age forever with every breath you release

(i can not pretend to decide in you what it is that moves
and devours me; only how in some things of what you mean
as the scent & touch of your eyes deeper than all devotions)
no song, nor ever any season, has such perfect tears.


for purr...



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On Saturday October 20th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
=)...Beautilicious and so, so heartfelt. You big ol' softy :) -Carl


On Saturday December 16th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
I think purr states it best: "meltsplendid".... Wow.


On Saturday February 18th, 2006, MindRape (886) writes:
you know it sometimes sucks as I'm reading through DP.com lately because I think of how I missed beautiful works of art such as this. I felt something tug on my breath as i read this. ~Much Respect~


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
awesome write. I enjoyed... and im sure im not the only one ~*~Tart~*~


On Friday February 4th, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:
This is sheer brilliance


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, knightmirror (425) writes:
great googly moogly my friend.....such passion drips from your heartsouls emotive words saturating the sight....so tenderly expressed for a beautiful person....i'm happy for you that you found your special someone....you both deserve eachother..


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, knightmirror (425) writes:
btw...i never did tell you congratulations.....so...with that...congratulations....you and her are finally complete.....i only imagine that feeling right now...but it must be undescribable.....thank you for sharing this feeling with all of us who live it


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, knightmirror (425) writes:
secondhandedly....-chris


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Solace (1424) writes:
You soppy romantic bum! hehehehehehe Feels like the summer for loving, hope i dont make too much of a fool of myself like you :P hahahahaha really though, yet again masterpiece work


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, flying_fox (769) writes:
*floats away on a cloud called Romance* Just beautiful Jon, you are indeed the keeper of my sweet sister's heart, and I am so glad you have it. Wonderful work.


On Monday December 27th, 2004, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
This really was rather moving. Fine work. I was directed to you by purr, and you didn't not disappoint. -pxc


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
Beautiful . . an absolute wonder to read..


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
such emoition. truly masterful


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
this is an extremely beautiful poem ,for someone beyond but your words


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, NikesRain (1474) writes:
beautifully done..*claps in ernest* absolutely lovely and tender words.....so remeniscent of mr cummings. wonderful!


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
good get; this one was inspired by one of his styles... ty.


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
breathtaking---you guys are so awesome together--and to inspire such a piece--......just enchanting!


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
still speechless in the face of such wonder, such beauty, such an honour... what can i possibly hope to say that does even the smallest amount of justice to how this makes me feel...? melted absolute, this is more than divine; such marvels only ever used


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
..only ever used to exist in my fictions - thank you, and more than, for a reality this supreme. *kiss*


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
+kiss+ you are the poem...


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Sin (1636) writes:
this was simply exquisite..beauty set upon a page expressing timeless devotion..what a breathtaking write for a wonderful woman ~kristy


On Wednesday March 14th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:
yep this still does..such beauty


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:
:) this was very beautiful indeed... a lovely poem for a lovely person... *tears*


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:
beautifully written


On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Stormcomin (43) writes:
Very soft and beautifully written. A true mastering of words.



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