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H A R D C A N D Y

Junkies have a way of finding scars
screams never seem to fade
rain, it’s like boils in the city
sometimes,
sometimes when it rains all the filth and scum
and piss and shit
actually washes down the sewers
and a new air struggles through the concrete alleys
concrete streets
avenues
bars
night clubs where the hard candy melts
where the hard candy bleeds
sweltering
like new children born in the darkness of the vein
the breathing of the night
the squeeze of the jazz and the ecstasy
the sucking of the flesh
like a cold contagious hunger
with soft teeth buried in warm flesh
but the night will pause for the heroin needle
the heroin sunrise
as the air drops the way glass smashes against subway exit signs
as the flesh of the city
is cut by drunks and the scum urinating on the scars of
dead flowers
dead photographs
dead visions
hard candy
the junkies dance in this carnival
this suicidal psycho Cinderella circus
this crystal crack cocaine candle
with the crows and the pigeons and the prostitutes
down on Broadway and 68th the hard way
and like Andrew says,
“city vultures never have to leave the ground.”
so fuck the scars
feel the sound.




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On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, Calypsos Lover (11) writes:
Gods, its never enough to spew on and one about how fucking orgasmic your words are, but all I can ever do is sit in front of my mac and...feel. -Div


On Friday March 14th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (389) writes:
This had me from the first line! Awesome and Honest!


On Thursday January 31st, 2008, Liz (406) writes:
agreed, the end is so good i'm about to read the whole thing over.


On Thursday January 31st, 2008, Liz (406) writes:
oh! and i had no idea it was you


On Thursday January 31st, 2008, skully (42) writes:
loving this, makes me realize I've got a lot to learn.


On Saturday December 29th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (151) writes:
I don't know why I decided to click on your first post when I was reading random poems, but I'm glad I did. Andrew Vachss is amazing and so is this poem! :)


On Monday March 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
This was fabulous filth concluding in the perfect final two lines, "so fuck the scars/feel the sound."


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
Ahh, thank you for going back & reading my 1st DP-post (HC still remains one of my personal faves). Ncase you didn't figure it out: Andrew is the Crime Writer Andrew Vachss & the City Vultures quote is from the first line in his fantastic novel Hard Candy


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
Yeah, I checked out your comment box conversation with Hatter below. And that line is definitely genius, "city vultures never have to leave the ground". I bet the cheeky bastard came up with it in 2 seconds, just for it to be appreciated for years and yea


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
rs to come. Once again, this was a darkly fantastic piece, Jon. Bloomin' nice!


On Friday November 3rd, 2006, verablue (161) writes:
fantastic write, such brutal imagery.


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
this is class .. dizzying grit at its finest .. dead flowers/dead photographs.|dead poems inhaled.makes the soul want to crawl into your journals for a front row seat into your thoughts ~


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
not quite the candy I meant; is it a street name for heroin, I didn't know that if so...damn. Man this kaleidoscopic snapshot...brittle as candy ina devil's pocket...hmm, I like that *makes note*..poem/paragon..Poe-m, Ravens=leaving the Tower...


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
my point is...Poe wrote the Raven...Ravens said to leave the Tower of London mark the fall of the monarchy; this poem with it's neon delusional city; Bladerunner forlorn, feels like the collapse


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
of civilisatio' of a chafing society gone wrong; lost in drugs and the dim cacophony of an outbound city..*makes note of that too*...


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
a really fine first post...I love the aliterative mayhem of the build towards the finale...what a class act...I bow in reverence and smash my head on my knees..hahaha...I'm so clumsy...this is grgeousity mate...I love it!!!


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
Andrew Vachss: his 1st book is called "Hard Candy"('89) &has one of the best 1st lines ever (see above quote). It's Crime Fiction at it's best, sharply defined & soiled w/ dark streets. Hard Candy=drugs &child porn (Burke, the detective,n many...


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
"city vultures never have to leave the ground..." right...I will look for this book....


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
2...cases busts the pushers of both illegals). Vachss is also a criminal lawyer/psychologist for troubled kids. I met his wife, once. She runs a killer crime bookshop in Vermont.


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
wicked...more insights...merci monsiuer!!


On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
Andrew...Warhol?


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
...Vachss! “city vultures never have to leave the ground.” is borrowed from the 1st line in his Hard Candy crimeNoirFiction novel (a must read!). If I had the funds I'd produce/Direct a film out of that book.


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
Nice guess... I'd like to see a Warhol Book Cover version of Hard Candy.


On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Jay Jii (336) writes:
(#1) So the journey begins again... In this snapshot of a vital, sneering city where streets run with addiction and the whispers of fetid ghosts echo in empty buildings. Beautiful illiterations, vivid descriptions...


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, manywalks (950) writes:
this puts me in mind of harlin ellison, the feel of it, and the title as well, didn't he write a book of shorts with the same title? hmm, that or poison candy. rat burgers, now i'm gonna have to look it up. excellence and grace as always. ~ wen


On Monday March 7th, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
Harlin! thanx; great writer, & yes, Ellison does have a collection under that title, but I borrowed it from an Andrew Vachss novel, whom the 'city vulture' quote is also from... ['rat burgers':lol!]


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
ahhh...I didn't read this comment initially....doh!!!


On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
wonderfully done!


On Monday April 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
i absolutely love the ending; pulseperfect in sudden finale... the stained shadows all over this; Fish's comment is great...hellparty indeed..."like a cold contagious hunger"...yes...


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'pulseperfect' always a gift w/ pure'amazing words you offer; thank you...


On Thursday March 11th, 2004, Jonas (867) writes:
your breath owns the gritty corruption, the sepsis of the city... the slow grind beat that the rhumatic asphalt knees bob with, reinforced with rebar they will never break. you know hell. you know the address of the party there.


On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
So tired of drugs and death... but a talented and beautiful write, of course. I love the beat at the end... it hits hard and on target.


On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
In this piece I couild hear the rapture, and corruption of the city. I could also feel the musicians' words and instruments singe my ears..pumping, the bass loud and rhythymic... I enjoyed this one immensely..Thanx!


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:
i can feel the city all around me..im breathing in its cold night air...then all the sudden...i run into a wall and fall to the ground out cold. lol. great write.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
WOW! this describes so well the city i live in...and yes the sound of it all...it's what's worse. i feel each word of it. Bravo!


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
man, i felt the sound. good write



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